I never thought that Hotaru will die.. I mean did she di that on purpose i wonder!

Thanks
D!

Awww! Hotaru and her feels...

This was really different and so sad..
I like how you wrote this chapter. The present followed by the past story and then back to present with the loving thoughts and memories..

Thanks
D!

wow.(sarcastic). don't mean to be mean,but really!? Mikan and hotaru are part of the main characters!

Amazing. X

This story was so emotional and sad. Death is a tragic thing. I congrat on being able to make me cry. This was so sad. I love the ending of this story. White does symbolize mikan..

This is such a wonderful story , it's simple but you know why i feel so many emotions you put it into this story

It also make me relize how beautiful life is , i never appreciate life before, so when i read this i'm so greatfull i was born healthy.

I may not someone who really pretty like all girls dream to be

I may not have a good grades

I may not have someone special in my life who i can share my story

But i was born healthy and a happy family which i never relize

Maybe this story will make me come closer with my family again

Thankyou so much for writing this story , i'm really gratefull i found this one.

You made me cry! Go on and make some more nice stories! Hope you would be able to touch more people's hearts. And I hope the parents of the child would hear of this fanfic you made just for their son. You are a very good author! I love how you write and touch people's hearts. Thank you! I favorited you, and this story!

That was a really sad two-shot, it brought me to tears...

It was truly beautiful, I envy your writing ability. Now I shall add it to my favourites list 3

There is a lot of things you managed to convey in this chapter.

For one, it wasn't just a chapter, not just a block of words, it was so much more.

There's something about it. I was teary-eyed, and trust me, girly, you brought the message across.

And that's what matters, isn't it?

Mixed feelings tumble inside me. It's an emotional turmoil. And like you said in your PM, it was deep.

Truthful and deep.

We care, because we know so much more.

You care, because you knew the boy.

Ruka and Hotaru care, because they know Mikan.

We know so much, we cry so much.

This story is a really beautiful one. And if I could, I'd favourite it again. Good work, Yuki.

Good work. I'm proud of you for what you did for this boy and his family.

They might never know, but I do. We do. Your friends and readers, and that's what's enough.

Write on, senpai.

~C (Shirei)

P.S. I'll reply your PM later. ;)

Awww~

You really did it! Loving it XD

I'll always support you!:)

~Silver

So sad

Props to you :) That was some beautiful angst.

Dearest Hinami, dearest dearest Hinami,

I love this piece. SO so much. There was something about it, the exquisite beauty of it and the serenity. It was elegant as well as sad. You don't know how much I love you do you? You're an amazing friend, a wonderful sister to me. You're FAMILY to me. You really are, and when we go to Heaven together, that's when I'll tell you everything. But you will come, won't you?

This story wasn't just revolved around Nat and Mi. There was also Hotaru and the clear friendship around them. I liked this fic, especially the end. It added such a wonderful end and conclusion to the whole piece itself.

You've grown so much in terms of writing. I really can't say the same for me. Sure I love writing the same, and I really dream to be good at it and actually write, but my progress in a whole is really just staying the same. You've grown. And you are my senpai, so that's to be expected. :D

I don't even know what to say about the dedication. I've left you (although reluctantly) and you still care? You really are the best in the world. One in a zabillion~!

I'm taking a risk, Yuki. A huge risk. First of all, could you check my blog (the RainyElles one) if you haven't already. I have two messages for you. You could just reply to them in a random story of mine. I've decided to open a new account. Winterberrytrillium has grown on me so much that it's ME! I'm thinking of a penname similar to the one mentioned above. And I have a new email too. I'll tell you on my blog if I have time.

I'm just so busy! I have exams and stuff, and I really want to ask, HOW'S HIGH SCHOOL~! Is it hard? Well, i do bet it is but still~! TELL ALL~!

I loved the word you used for the separations... For beautiful... (well, I can't really describe it in English, but... I bet you get it. That's our telepathic power!)

Lovey lovey lovey lovey,

Loves and best wishes,

Shirei

Oh no. This fic seriously touched me. T_T (Imagine me with a sad face here)

Nooo. Why would Mikan have to die?

:/

I’m still sad.

But you’re one of those good authors who makes my emotions sway with just one moment. -.-

Natsulove is alone. :((

(Don’t mind my ranting. XD)

Continue writing pieces. :D

(Adds to Fav)

~ Lunar