I really very much enjoyed this, it was perhaps a little too dnd specific for me, but it was a great deal of fun all the same, a great look at an adult Harry at hogwarts etc.

Given the dates involved I am not going to be holding my breath for the promised sequel, but all the same, thank you for sharing and best of luck with your endeavours.

Thank you for writing. It was a very enjoyable read. I do not know if you still monitor this site, but if so, I will continue reading your works.

Thank you for writing. I still have a few chapters to go but wanted to let you know in case I lost the link.

You go Luna!

I love how he isn't neglecting anyone! He even ask the ghosts and portraits!

Well done Harry! The students parents paid for that education ad they should get what they paid for! Not storytime or naptime!

Ha! Ha! He got to learn apparition without Dumbledore surveillance!

Go Hufflepuff!

Nice way to deal with Fluffy!

I loved how Harry talked about light and dark! That he knew riht away that light didn't actually mean good just because of Dumbledore was hilarious!

You tell them Harry!

I was expecting it, but sending Ranger Harry to Hogwarts ruined the potential of this story. You created a man (By another worlds standard sure, but still) then turned him back into the boy with one move. We won't see a Ranger being allowed to shine at his role, we'll see a boy who TALKS about all the ranger stuff he can do in between going to class. All talk, no show. That's what locking him up in a cage full of children does. No grand adventures or quests, no suspense, no monsters or fierce battles.

This would be like a campaign that starts with player characters attending a school and never leaving it. It'd need to be one HELL of a school and world to pull that off and Hogwarts clearly isn't one of them.

Love the story, HATE the line breaks with a passion. Google reader reads them out loud. "ADND, ADND ADND ad finitum. Please make it stop.

Awesome

this was fun. did you ever carry on? can't see it in your storys.