Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I love to see someone else who thinks that even though Astral doesn't tend to show a lot of emotion, he FEELS it. A lot. And... It's just touching to see someone who sees their relationship in that light; where Yuma hides his pain, and Astral feels guilty about things that really aren't even his fault, and Yuma understands him and sees him as his best friend, and well, Astral wants to help him any way he can. This is truly heartwarming. I just love it. :)

It's Sparrow, not Robin. Robin is from Batman

Such story...XD

Good job! I especially liked how you said Astral is Yuma's closest friend. I also think it fits, because the two of them have become closer as friends in some of the last few episodes.

aww, poor astral :(

Awww...so sweet 3

Well done !

This was... Is... Beautiful. Really great work! You are truly an amazing writer! :) Keep up the great work!

-SilverFalkin

This was really adorable! I loved Astral and Yuma's interactions, they rang very true to me.

Excuse me while I fangirl out about this: aklsdjfshdf 3

AWW~! SO SWEET! -

I'm glad to seen a hardcore fan around! I know a lot people think Zexal is childish and lame, but I LOVE Zexal! It's different, and in a good way! People just used to a super deluxe duelist for last 10 years of the Yu-Gi-Oh series...Yuma is different in many ways, but he is...like the sun...~-~

I hope to see more Zexal stories from you! -