Reviews for Lousy Hormones
NinjaKittinz chapter 1 . 10/15/2017
Nah man! Bruce was AMAZING! I honestly think that people make him too Batman-y when he's out of costume. This is the best Bruce Wayne I've seen in a while. Not Batman, and not *shudders* ...Brucie.
He's human. And I love Bruce and Dick just being I dunno, normal people? And doing normal people things? As normal as they can be for famous billionaires by day, and secret vigilante/superheroes by night anyway.
Rabia chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Omg- i loved it-it was amazing i just cant even i love how alfred got involved and Bruce actually opened up a bit
ArkieR chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Awwwwww, DaddyBats! :D Love this!
Abbie-As-Sue.29 chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
That was funny! Loved it!
Kitskune Miyake chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Those two are more alike than they'd care to admit...

Oh, but it's so nice to see them bond over their ineptness with hormones and love. It seems so right...great job!
Data Seeker chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Hi

Nice little one-shot.

The quality is very good; good narration, interaction, dialog, complexity drama and emotion.

Your idea of a possible pairing (Robin and Zatara) is an interesting one.

Your portrayal of Robin and Batman was interesting, and I think their very in character, and when they do something that doesn’t fit them, you do them in a way that is believable.

The wholesome standards are totally high.

The language is clean.

Nothing is suggestively offensive.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker
I Vas Naever Heer chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
I was loling throughout the story, which was ... cute, and nice. Just like a Robin
Rowan Rose chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Awesome story
Kaien Brief chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
this is cute
Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
DITTO!

XD

~Ani
Algol H chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Bruce was a little OOC, but not horribly so. He seems much more squishy and lovable in YJ. Still, seeing him bust out a 'Richard Jonathan Grayson,' made me think a bit too much of fussy mother. Of course, then I tried really hard to picture how Bruce Wayne would say it, and it was hilarious.

The banter was pretty good. The dramatic bits came naturally. Your description and grammar were pretty good.

:"Heavens no, Master Richard. On the contrary, I don't approve of these teenage romances.":

Alfred is a boss. So hard he even tells Batman what to do.

I liked it.
Reading Nut Cassirole chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
i liked it very funny

keep up the good work :)
Purple Majestic chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
awesome
Abigail Thalia La Rue chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
No, not OOC at all. I love their relationship, it's funny, cuz you never really think of Batman as the paternal type.

Love ya!

-Abby T. La Rue
sunnydayz56 chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Yay! You have a reference of Selina! Quite honestly I think you should do one of all them. J'onn and M'gann, Barry and Wally, Black Canary and Superboy, and Aqualad and Alfred could watch from the sidelines laughing the whole way.

I love what Alfred said about love, its very true.
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