...sh*t's about to go down, right?

Wait I have a question since his mother is native American does she hate white people and so wants to kill all of them? because that would lower America's warfaring down a lot because the military is mostly white people.

Wow. You have a pretty decent idea here.

the story is so good and well thought out, but i can tell that you don't proofread. So many common mistakes is basic English grammar and sentence structure, it makes some parts hard to understand, and theorefore hard to enjoy.

ARE YOU FUC*ING KIDDING ME. GO WATCH HETAONI RIGHT NOW. HOW DO YOU FEEL ABOUT FELI(ITALY) NOW, MO{RFU#%ER?!
Otherwise, great and angsty and yummy.
(J)

I saw listening to "See You Again" by Carrie Underwood while reading this...I almost died crying...

IT'S SO SAD! Its so emotional...I can feel the tears in my eyes,,,,,,,

I sat down and cried a couple of river after reading this story...for a few of days.*cough cough* This was so amazing I understood everything and it was well planned. And my God, It was beyond interesting, I need a whole nether world to describe it. Thank you for gracing me with this sad but epic story.

Hands down, the BEST STORY I HAVE READ EVER! I love the story line, plot, how it just basically played out.. IT BROUGHT SO MUCH FEELS TO ME... *claps* It's just so great..

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I really like it. It make me a bit sad at one point, but I loved how careful you were in writing the emotional scenes. The only advice I can give is when Canada thinks "he didn't have die" you didn't have to CAPITALIZE. You could go "He... didn't have to die!" It's those small details that help out a lot.

Wow, this story was so captivating and brilliant, what a wonderful imagination! I spent almost two whole days to finish it, it was defiantly not a waist of time or anything like that, I couldn't pull myself away, I had to know what happened! And the ending was right for the story, it went along with everything that had happened. You explained and described things very well and I don't have any questions really at all. I just want to thank you so much for putting so much of your time and effort into writing this work, and also that you wrote it at all! You are a wonderful writer, and I wouldn't be surprised in the slightest if you were to become, or already are, a published author! Thank you so much for everything, really, it was a beautiful story and wonderful in ever sense of the word! Thank you so much!

What does she think of Amelia?
What does everyone think of Alfred?
How does the world remember him?
Why did he go evil?
Why was he chosen?
Is he truly innocent? Like what is his real soul?

I love your Story, But why must Alfred die! Its wasn't his fault. It was the sword was controlling him and why must be the FACE family only one attend his funeral.
WHY! its so sad for him to die.

I like the idea of Amelia in the story but this still leaves me one question, is Alfred still alive or not. I got a strange feel that Amelia is Alfred, just as a different person.

I know you don't like belame yuri, but since you said for me to take the ending anyway I want, I will keep my yuri fantasies.
I knew you thought of America as a friend, Russia! Don't you deny it! And you too, china! No matter how much you guys hated America...
It's kind of true, though...the purest are easy to corrupt...
It's so sad that the funeral had to be only with the face family...and that everyone was celebrating even when America commuted suicide. I mean, I completely understand why, given the circumstances, but still...what a sad way to die...just...so...sad...
Japan is so so sweet. He and his little crush.
I'm kind of curious about what this memorial looks like.
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If America's soul went away...what about the states?
Anyways, this story made me so so sad and stuffs...it's amazing. Like you. I'm also shameless so I'm saying that.
Boo