Very nice and very entertaining. You going to add another chapter that introduces Naraku to the Taisho family and some of the strays that will be added? What of Miroku and Sango? Will they be in the next chapter?

I have such conflicting feelings about formalities. I like manners and do believe that there needs to be a level of respect between some people but the Japanese take it way to far. Respecting your elders is one thing but having to call you own mother or brother Mr or Mrs is just too much. Anyway nice story, Sessomaru was portrayed well.

What a lovely story. It was very well thought out and the details add so much. One thing spirals into another seamlessly, very well written. And the unsung hero of it all was Ji-chan! :) I really enjoyed reading your story! What a lovely microcosm of an epic tale. I can see myself coming back to read it again once in awhile, and if that's not the test of excellent writing, I don't know what is. Thank you very much, I really loved it! :)

i do feel at least, a little sorry for Inuyasha...i mean, without the tenseiga he'd have eventually lost it a become a ravaging mindless monster...and he doesn't have it. Doomed to an ugly end after an ugly, lonely life. dogs are pack animals, Yasha didn't have one till Kagome showed up. His brother didn't want anything good to do with him. Myoga was a flea and a coward, probably because he was a flea, and so small. Ok, Yasha's more then a bit of a jerk, tsundere git that he is. in a world were everything else is out to kill you break you, eat you not necessarily in that order...could you blame him to a point?
This story is different which is great, but trapped inside his father's bones, LITERALLY all alone for the rest of however long he lived until he lost his mind...Either way, it ends badly, this life he never asked for. Yasha wouldn't have chosen such a life. That was thrust upon him, by the reckless actions of two careless people...love or no, Inutaisho knew how half breeds lived, and their fate. Yet how could he have just leapt without looking, and hoped for the best? Out of sheer dumb luck! Yo! big dog, power and responsibilities, dude. seriously. Fantastic story!

Such a fresh take on the two. It was wonderful, thank you.

Such a lovely, unique story! I almost had to laugh at the way you managed to get Inuyasha and Kouga out of the way so Sesshoumaru had a clear field to court her. I love a Kagome who is skilled as well as powerful. You brought them together in such a reasonable manner, and you definitely saluted the canon story. This one goes straight into my favorites! Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us!

Like it a lot

This is seriously one of the best stories I've read in this fandom! I think that's the 7th time or so that I've read it. Thank you so much for sharing this. I love the character development and I'm a great fan of a no nonsense Kagome who doesn't let inuyasha put her down. The whole relationship between her and Sesshoumaru is so well written that I will definitely read this another 7 times if not more! Please continue to write for SessKag cause I really love your stories!

I really enjoyed this story. Love the way that you wrote all of the characters.

Woah. Kagome really is immortal, because of the Shikon not anything else. Awesome!

Loved this! It was a lovely story of Kags and Sesshomaru. :3

Fantastic story! I loved every second of it!
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One of the most wonderful stories I've read!

Woow

absolutely adore this new timeline!

this is my first read of your story and I must say I loved and enjoyed it very much... great work of art :)