I know it has been ages, but I hope you continue this.

Enjoyed the update! :D Look forward to more

Great chapter! This is an extremely fun read. Lol, you've captured Garrus's flustering quite aptly.

Oh my god you have to continue, i haven't read anything this good in such a long time and i have A LOT of books pretty please with a cherry on top, continue this awesome story!

very good story, but i think you might have missed some character development by not having chapters in between matches

This was amazing. The way you write the battles really lets me "see" them and it is done very well. I wonder what was wrong with Grant- hope to find out soon! I always liked Nihlus so I am glad he is in here and he totally rocks in your fic.

i think the words "political shit-storm" would work pretty well in this situation.

I really disliked that dude.

Looking forward to more! :D

Exciting story, can't wait for more

Man, that was a sweet chapter. When I began to read the story I thought it was an intriguing idea, but that's all. Glad to see you could deliver with the writing and plot development. I like to characters and the world feels pretty realistic.

I'm looking forward to see what you'll do next, and I hope the crazy-biotic-Grant will be a part of the plot, and that it wasn't just some plot device with no explanation.

Good job!

Best action scene I've read in a long time! Can't wait for more!

Ooh, this was frankly awesome. I always have a lot of difficulty in writing believable action scenes myself, so I doubly have respect for well-written action that is realistically brutal and detailed without going into the realm of beyond the abilities of the characters involved. I love how while Shepard's team is acting as a cohesive group, someone's set up the Turian-led group with two anti-Turian individuals (I have to wonder if someone engineered it that way or if it's just luck of the draw) so that they're at each other's throats even while Nihlus is trying to keep control.

Meant to keep this short and sweet, but let me just say, the addition of Shepard rattling off orders in both languages (showing her expanding her mental barriers beyond what most Alliance soldiers likely have bothered to know) was particularly awesome to see.

Love this! Very creative. I can not wait for the next update! :)

Great action sequence! Adrenaline rush!

Awesome! Look forward to more!