That was adorable!

Good chpt. Love the back and forth with Nico and Isabelle. Nico is musically inclined, he played the guitar in the Nico 'Files and also sang with Coach, so you are right on! Hope you are still writing because you are talented.

Love it thanks

Really like this chapter. Thanks

I love this story all together. Granted the last line you could have had Nico sing, " Oh, and I'm on my way to believing".

I just finished your story. All 12 chapters. This was one of those stories you can't stop and give a review because it's just too good to stop for any reason. Granted I had the pleasure of doing that because I just found it. But if I had to wait it would have driven me crazy because it's so good. This story is going on my list of favorites. Thank you so much for sharing such a great read.

Well I enjoyed it very much and can't wait to read more.

Great story :) Well written, great plot... what more could a reader ask for :)
thanks a lot...

I loved this, great job!

You have no idea how much I love the line "you will, or I'll cry." Or how much I wish it would work on my brother.

The premise of the story is adorable. Your dialogue is sold: engaging and natural. There are, however a few kinks that need to worked out. For instance: "dark black" is redundant. Also, speaking as someone with well over a decade's experience in the mental health field, no competent (and Dani is supposed to not only be competent but top tier) therapist, psychiatrist, psychologist, or counselor would ever say "Well, either way I am glad you've decided to go and we'll see what happens, who knows, maybe we'll find something I can cure after all." There are a couple problems with this.

1. A therapist who respects themself and their profession knows that a patient can only be helped as far as they are willing to be helped, and that an unwilling patient will make little to know progress. You could argue that Dani looks forward to the opportunity to prove herself, but that seems unlikely with the rest of the sentence.

2. You don't tell a patient that "maybe we'll find something I can cure." First off, most mental problems aren't thought of as cured, but as treated or managed. Second, that phrasing is weak. (as in not empowered, not as in lame). It sounds as if something might be found that needs to be cured, but is outside the competence level of the speaker. Finally, cured means there's something patently wrong with the patient. while that may be true in some cases, it can make the patient defensive, and work against their self-esteem, and even make them feel alienated.

I don't want you to think that I'm trying to troll you; I genuinely like the beginning of this story. I just want you to see where you stumbled, so you can avoid those rocks in the future.

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That was a very sweet and touching ending. I loved the sequence when she was picking out a dress to wear.

I look forward to your next Dani and Nico story!

That was the perfect ending to an awesome story and I also can't wait to see how Dani and Nico's characters play out next season(if only it would hurry up and get here already!).

Hmmmm... What is Nico planning?

Glad Dani and Nico talked.