Reviews for Innocence
TheCauldron chapter 3 . 8/12/2016
This was all kinds of hot, and I'm completely jealous of Optimus right now...
GirlWhoLovesAnime chapter 3 . 12/6/2015
Optimus not so innocent anymore~ x3
CCGhastly chapter 3 . 7/31/2015
Awe
AliceSylvia chapter 3 . 4/2/2014
Beautiful.
CatsPrivateBedroom chapter 3 . 9/27/2012
A perfect ending. I loved it! I love this story. Written so perfectly! Well done! I wish you the best on any and all future stories you choose to write.
CatsPrivateBedroom chapter 2 . 9/27/2012
Awe. I like that he is using his nick name for him. So amazing!
CatsPrivateBedroom chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Awe!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
AMAZING! I FREAKING LUV IT! More times a million please!
pgsmrocks chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
Love it! So very hot and smexy! *fans self*

Interesting idea that Ratchet had to take Optimus' sexual innocence so he could be the Prime he was meant to be.

Well done.
Morrigayn DeWyvern chapter 3 . 1/3/2012
I remember reading the first chapter awhile back and was intrigued with the idea. I definitely like where you went with this and the reasoning behind it. Nice fic. Well done.
Camfield chapter 3 . 1/3/2012
This was a really interesting idea! I kinda equated it to a temple priestess, or someone who teaches in pleasure even though that wasn't really the goal.

It is quite interesting to think that imprinters can change?Alter?Direct? the growth of a new mech.

Super cool, super hot. :D
kimiko-tsuki chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
ooohhh... I just loved this to bits.

It's strange how IC they seem, for all that OP, at least, is actually very OOC. And, well, Ratchet actually fits with my head-cannon of him; it explains many of his behaviors :)

And lookit! Fist review, Yay!