I LOVE THIS PAIRING. I'm so happy you wrote it. Even though it's short. You're perfect. Aw, poor Lysander, poor Scorpius for being so broken - poor everyone! I feel like their relationship will always be a little bit doomed.

Wow this was really powerful in so little words! I felt really sorry for Lysander, always getting the wrong end of the bargain, never loved by anyone as much as he loves them.

:( This was sad. Poor Lysander!

I like that we don't quite know what "it all" is. It's nice to have that certain air of mystery to this.

I get such a vivid picture of both their characters from so few words; I'm really impressed! I liked "Roxanne Weasley (that bitch)" because that tiny reference somehow makes it seem much more real.

This was very cute and though it is a couple I don't really like - not that I've read a lot of it - I really liked this. They worked together in this, and it was a very nice piece to read.
Good work ;)

Oh, a nice twisting of the prompt, and great emotions-I always think drabbles are hard.

It's rare to see Scorpius written so much like his father. And to read a NextGen story that isn't about a Weasley at all. But you do a good job with this. I especially love the first paragraph.

This was a great drabble! I like the mention of LysanderRoxanne, even though it wasn't necessarily a positive mention - LysanderRoxanne is actually the only het non-cousincest Roxanne pairing I really ship. I feel bad for poor Lysander here - you've really shown his emotions well in such a short little drabble. Beautifully-written, with no spelling or grammar mistakes, and I really enjoyed reading this - it was wonderfully-done, even though I don't ship the pairing. You may have converted me just a little. Great work!

I love short drabbles, and I love how much you're able to show us in this. You do a great job portraying Scorpius in this, and I really love it! :D

So sad!
But very promising

;D

awwwh poor albus! i think he was jinxed in this - either Gryffs or Slytherins, i'm assuming. stupid house rivalry. i can completely relate to how he feels though, like you want to laugh it off, but you just can't because it's just too hurtful, too painful. :/

excellent work, loafy! :3

always,
summer

wow... great chapter/story (by the way, like all the others! you've already written so much but every chapter's still different and i always wait for the next one, hope you continue your good work :) )

and especially for this one: very interesting pairing!

I read the first five of these. I have a lot of respect for anyone who can write drabbles effectively. I like the foreshadowing you use in some of these. They make me want you to write larger pieces centered on the couples.

Good Job

You captured Hugo's thoughts wonderfully. It's done in a few words, and you've been able to manage that!

hahahahahaha

wow that was pretty damned amazing, visa! i love how it was in first person and how he was just ogling her boobs, which was really funny. seriously

i loved it. xx

That was adorable, Lo! I really loved it, it was just afsghsdfsd-y & amazing. When I read the prompt, I assumed it would be Lucy saying that and then you just twisted it round and turned it on it's head and VOILA, it was Ly. and I felt like using the word voila, okay, don't judge. ;)

great job, lo! :D