I want that feeling. I loved the way you described the story and I think it was super cute,

Oh dear, that was so beautifully sweet I think I have tears in my eyes. Seriously, you are just a fantastic author! I am in awe. That was just perfect.

I love this story, it's a very cute idea!

If I could give one suggestion though? Try not to break the fourth wall. Talking about points of facts presented earlier in your writing is OK for a research project, or an essay, but not so much for a story.

But still, fantastic story!

-YJ

sO cute! adorable~

I totally enjoyed it, and sine I liked it, I shall follow your "suggestion" and review .

The beginning was /amazing/ when you contrast what people think and what actually goes on . and I loves me some contrast~

The way you incorperate things into the fic is really good, "(/Heavy/ on the dis)", "kisses did /not/ work on boys, not in this case" etc. And I love getting all those little jokes .

Breaking the fourth wall is HILARIOUS! I love it when fanfiction writers break the fourth wall in their fic! (The stupid wall should stay broken but NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO it has to keep being rebuilt -_-)

I can totally see Wally just being able to sleep whenever wherever he wants, because he's that awesome LOL

Manly excuses to cuddle up to your boyfriend FTW .

Yes, Dick's body with all those battle scars is totally delicious .

AW! Wally just wants to know his little bird can come back to him . It's so adorable how he phrases it too~

"Words cannot describe..." well you do a pretty damn good job~ D

Yup, Wally/Dick is totally adorable~ .

Please do continue writing~ D

-TWWOO

Okay, my inner fangirl just let loose, and now my friend is making me type this up on my laptop instead. Apparently my 'aww'ing was annoying them...oh well. Tough luck for them. I just had to do it ;)

I SOOOOO loved this! I loved how you worded it, how you combined the song with the story, the topic, the point of view with Wally at the end.../everything/! Absolutely enjoyed the cozy fuzzy moment XD

- Rein

That. Was. So. Sweet. *-* Ahhh. I feel all warm and fuzzy now :D

Ooh, and 'So, if we scroll back up to the first or second paragraph' broke the fourth wall so well! I did a fair bit of laughing at that. Nice. :D

U did amazing. I loved this.

This was beautifully written. I truly like the concept and it does have a fairly realistic touch. To picture both of them sleeping together like that, it just make me coo inside my head. Your neat writing and perfect flow helps me love this story even more. Your choice of words are perfect to the story and you made it all very believable and sweet.

Good job!

- MoR

Omg, this is beatiful •A• really really great! Omg~ please keep writing about this paring 3

Sorry about the message idn much english

That was... Adorable...

Awwwwww :3

So...adorable...need...to breathe...*gasp*