İt was cute

Linda historia me encanta la ternura que le pones a Dean junto a Sam y claro lo dulce que es siempre Sam.
Además como muestras el lado paternal de Jhon y bueno como dejar atrás al cascarrabia de Bobby haces que los ame cada día más.
Me gusta a traves de las historias ver la forma en que nació y se fortaleció la relación entre los hermanos porque al verla en la pantalla uno puede imaginar que esa relación tan fuerte fue algo que nació desde muy pequeños.
Felicitaciones

god damn. why do you constantly refer to sam and dean as "tiger" and "ace" i read one of your other stories and it was the same deal. its really annoying

You're an excellent author. A Whiter Shade of Pale is very beautifully written. It's impressive how much research you did on the medical facts for this. This as good as watching Supernatural or reading one of the novels. I just can't tell you enough how much I enjoyed all twenty three chapters. Loved the all touching moments between John, Dean, and Sam.

wonderful story.

So ever since you posted this I thought it was titled "A "Winter" Shade of Pale" and as I was about to re-read this for the like 5th time, I realized it said "Whiter". I feel like such a dingus.

I love your story! This was a great read!

You're very medically accurate. Did you do research for this piece?

Só uma palavra para descrever:
PERFEITO!
simplesmente perfeita essa fic, OH MY GOD!
(indo para o próximo capítulo)

so baeuty

I quite like teen Sam. I keep picturing that adorable kid that played him in the show. What a little heartbreaker. Another lovely "limp" Sam story. I'm really getting through them! :-) xo

Oh, the end? I'm bummed there will be no more updates on this one, but I did very much like how it ended. Thanks so much for a great story and happy, very LATE, New Years to you as well. Don't forget my friend, make sure to take some time for your self and trust me when I say when things get too heavy go do something silly, make yourself laugh and don't be embarrassed to get goofy. It does help! Nicole.

great story! LOVED IT!

So sorry for the waaay late review. I've been in the hospital so this was like one of the first things I did!
Anyway I'm glad that Sammy will be okay. Poor kid. You know with all the hunters he had he would be fine though. Dean was sweet. How I miss the Dean that gave one crap about his brother and not some freakin vampire he has known all of one freakin year. Sorry I had to get that in. Excellent Job!

Aww great ending hon! Glad Sam and Dean got to talk. Look forward to your next SPN story! _