I can safely say, that was fabulous

Great!

Last sentence was perfect! Couldn't stop laughing!

D'awww, what a sweet, mischievous little oneshot! I love the fact that Merlin purposefully made Arthur and gwaine uber jealous ;) and I also liked that part where gwaine tried to look sexy and fight arthur at the same time, hehe. I found it a bit odd when you put: you'd stutter if the one you love kissed you too, or some sort of line like that. This is just ny opinion, and a small suggestion I guess, but maybe try not to add "you" or "I" or directing phrases in context toward the reader when writing in third person POV. Bluh, I just think that the phrases regarding the reader won't necessarily relate to the reader and such so...yeah. just a suggestion, but you don't have to follow it hahaaa ; otherwise, nice job! It was a cute and fun read. :)

Hehehehe, this made my day, especially the ending!

lol
all was gay huh?
:P

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Haha! I loved how poor Lancelot didn't catch on to what merlin was doing, also loved Gwaine showing off with his sexy hair flip. The last line was definatly my favourite!

Haha nice last sentence. "all was gay" ;-)

Sugar is very speechless. She cannot find the words that even begin to describe how awesome this is.

"All was gay"

KSNXSSHH. THIS FREAKING MADE MY DAY.

Another well constructed treat Shipper Friendly. The sequence of events are well plotted with just the right timing to lock the audience in through to the end. And through the frivolity of it all, you may not have realized how historically close to reality your events may seem. Since the legend of Arthur is set at the end of the reign of the Roman Empire, it is suggested that Arthur (Arturias - Roman/Celtic origin) is of an ex-roman soldier heritage. Homosexuality was common in Roman society and throughout its leadership, though it may not have been on public display (Romans did not want to be seen like the Greeks). That heritage brought to England continued through the middle ages as many of the royal family were homosexual, it was thought that women were so looked down upon as lower citizens that some would refuse to lay with them. One final thought - because homosexuality was common in society during those first centuries, there was no single word (words like "gay" actually began to take root in the 1950's) to describe or denegrate those who participated... which brings me to your last line. Certainly everyone was indeed happy!

This was brilliant! XD And at the very beginning, I had this weird vision of all of them as a Family Guy episode. Especially when Arthur and Gwaine are creeping them to the pub. The when Arthur goes, "Hello Merlin." I laughed out loud because I imagined with the tone of Peter Griffin when he goes, "Hey Brian."

OMG, this fic... this fic... XD

I totally love how you portray everyone, and the ending line is sheer perfection. It totally sums up how a lot of fans view the show. I mean, come on, just in the last episode alone, there were so many homosexual moments. Man, those knights can be shipped with just about anyone...

Well done!

Hehehehe that was brilliant. Especially the last line, it was perfect in a can. Well, line, I guess, but all my metaphors have gotten mixed up lately and I'm not exactly sure why. Whatever. Great, actually somewhat believable (lol!) crack!fic. Write more soon?