Reviews for The Power of the Mind ORIGINAL
Kushka chapter 29 . 5/12
Great story
noice chapter 29 . 5/12
nice
Guest chapter 2 . 4/2
Seriously I get dying the hair it’s stupid and edgy but I get it though it is completely unnecessary. But green seriously a guy who dyes there hair green and doesn’t do it to go with a persona they created for the internment and by that I mean a YouTuber or influencer is basically screaming to the world how much they like a cock up their ass.
gginsc chapter 29 . 12/20/2019
I forgot to check to see if this story was really complete. You have wasted my time like so many fanfic authors before!
Bronze chapter 18 . 10/19/2019
Oh GOD! I had a friend who was an auto mechanic and he went into an auto parts store and asked the guy behind the counter for a lefthanded pasnaris clamp for a late model car he was working on. He had two or three guys looking through almost every catalog for it. Just like you lefthanded screwdriver. Several times he pulled the same thing on new staff. The oldtimers never said a thing about it. I won't use the guys' name as someone might recognize it. He worked on a lot of people's cars over the years. Mainly in one city but I really don't know everywhere he ever worked. Getting back to the story though. I think Lily would've either kill Sirius or maybe skin Padfoot alive for getting Harry a Firebolt racing broom. Likely James would've been right there beside Sirius when he bought it egging him on. It's also highly likely Lily would forbid Harry ever riding the motorcycle regardless of how many safety charms it had on it!
Bronze chapter 17 . 10/19/2019
Ya, life may've been good right then but Fumblemort ain't out of the picture yet! Nor is ol' Vulturesnot. Both old farts have an unhealthy interest in Harry. Namely, they both want him dead just for different reasons. If Vulturesnot is as smart as everybody seems to think, then why does he believe it was all Harry's doing that he lost his body? Harry was 1.5 yrs old at the time and Riddle truly believes it was Harry that made him a wraith? There's no way that makes any sense! Now, something Lily and James did? Yes, that I'd believe! Lily or James on their own? Again that I'd believe. But Harry alone at 1.5 years? No way in hell would I believe that! That Fumblemort made the whole thing up for his own plans? Oh, hell yes! I find that far more likely than a one and a half-year-old baby doing it! Frankly, with just how poorly he's handled taking care of Harry since then, I wouldn't trust him with a long-dead stone never mind a child of any age!
Guest chapter 14 . 10/2/2019
This is a fucking masterpiece I love it soooooooo much
Bronze chapter 15 . 9/20/2019
A program like that would be a Potions Masters worst nightmare! Think about it! The program could lead to computer-controlled Potions Brewing. Which in turn could lead to needing fewer Potions brewers and thus fewer Potions Masters. Snape could experiment as long as he liked but not know for sure adding what to what would result in. Whereas with the computer program someone would already know that adding something could result in an explosion. Likely as not, the Potions Guild would outlaw any such potions.
Bronze chapter 8 . 9/13/2019
A little omake here. Harry returns to Privet Dr. and sneaks into the house. He then modifies the tv and remote to absorb magic constantly before sneaking back out leaving a small ward type stone just outside the living room window. Within a few days, both the tv and remote explode while the Dursley's sleep. Vernon falls out of bed in shock with Petunia on top of him. Dudley shits the bed in fear. Revenge is sweet even when you're not there to see it.
Bronze chapter 5 . 9/12/2019
Harry should also at least consider redundancy or backups(whichever you want to call it) for all his memories. You can bet Fumblemort isn't above replacing ALL his work to keep Harry under his thumb. He's already damn near drained all the Potters' wealth. And likely feels it's ok for him to do this as Harry must martyr himself for his Greater Good.
vampdreams chapter 29 . 8/8/2019
I absolutely love what you've written so far.
I hope you had continued!
slytherinsal chapter 18 . 4/20/2019
... and now Sirius has control of all his ward's finances and can block any further withdrawals and ask for an investigation
Dugleik chapter 8 . 4/20/2019
Um...your timeline is way of. There were no iPods in the early 90's
Olly chapter 10 . 2/20/2019
To be fair to Hermione, I wouldn't have believe Harry either when he is coming back from summer after his second year and claiming he was capable of making electronics works with magic, something which is supposed to be impossible. It's just too unbelievable of an achievment for a barely 13 year old.
Seanthiar chapter 29 . 12/20/2018
DON'T mark a not complete story complete !
1,243 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »