Lolzies! Hilarious ending! I love this story!

I am glad I continued to the story. It just got better every chapter. The ending was a bit abrupt, but still good. Thank you for writing this story and sharing it.

Okay, so this story is interesting, but it has a lot of plot holes that make no sense. Like Naruto not giving his name because he says he doesn't want then to find his village or take the Kyubi out of him. Naruto doesn't know he is in another world, so as far as he is concerned Roy and Co. are from the Elemental nations. First, he is wearing his headband that depicts Konoha, and everyone in the Elemental nations knows where it is and recognizes the symbol. So him not wanting them to know his village or where to find it makes no sense. Second, everyone in the Elemental nations knows about the Kyubi, and what a jinchuuriqi is, so if they saw him transform then they would know he is the container of the fox. Him not wanting them to know that also makes no sense, since they would know already. Third, Naruto always gives his name and goal in cannon, even when he shouldn't. Fourth, Pein is already attacking his village and knows he is they fox holder. So that whole logic as far as Naruto's behavior makes no sense. If Naruto knew he was in a different world, then it might make more sense, since he might be cautious of how this world could affect his. But he doesn't know, so him not saying his name, village, and fox status makes no sense since if they were from his world they would know at least two of those things. The fact that they didn't recognize the fox and his village should have been warnings to Naruto that something is odd, specially the fox.

Roy and Co. behavior make sense and even how they assume Naruto is humonculi. How and why they question him is logical and because of how different and varied the humonculi in the past have been. Some more "human" than others. Some transform too, so that makes sense.

I will still read more, because it isn't a bad story it just doesn't make sense on Naruto's stand point. I do like the plot and I am curious to see where the story goes and how it develops.

This story is retarded. You made Naruto dumb as hell.

This is stupid. Why would he let himself be in this situation. This is just sad

A name that I could see getting under Roy's skin would be Hugh Mann because of Maes Hughs and because they are operating under the assumption that he is a Homunculus... a fake Hugh Mann lol

This is great!

I hate how you made naruto so weak when this is naruto when he beat naruto/the naruto with enough training to beat pain and he still gets his ass kicked and apparently he lost most of his chakra and if you say that naruto lost his chakra and he has very little just as much as lee he would most likely die if he had that much chakra in his system you also for got that he's an uzumaki and knows "senjutsu(sp?)

That’s more Kurama’s bag than ‘Ruto’s.

I kinda want a sequel but “One Piece Edition”! *Waves hands in a rainbow shape*

The reason Orochimaru and Jiraiya could change the seal is because they used chakra. Simply burning or peeling off the skin isn’t going to work. Even burning it off with chakra isn’t going to do anything unless it’s a sealing technique of some sort. Also, Naruto shouldn’t have his necklace if he went berserk.

Wait! This is post-Pain Naruto?! The one that could that could do Sage Mode and Rasenshuriken? The one defeated FUCKING Pain?! Okay... I'm done with this fucking bullshit of a story!

This is really pathetic. Seriously pathetic. Naruto should have NO trouble breaking out. I FUCKING HATE AUTHORS THAT DOWNPLAY NARUTO CHARACTERS! Seriously, this story is crap!

lmao

Boi. Fix up your mistakes. Spelling in general.