This is really nice! I'm happy to see there are still Rimahiko fanfics being updated :) Your writing is definitely leagues better than it was when you started this story! Not just spelling and grammar (though I will remember the old chapter where you accidentally wrote lesion instead of lesson...I was like, wait, someone has a lesion?!). I was pleasantly surprised to see the issues with Rima's parents as well as those with Ikuto being dealt with instead of being brushed to the side. I'm excited to see how everything will be resolved!
This is a small thing, but I think using double quotes instead of single quotes would make the story easier to read for most people, as double quotes are the current standard. (Unless you were going for a classical look, in which case go ahead)
Well, I'll be looking forward to the rest of this! Keep up the good work!

Please update :)

A very good story! I hope you will be able to update soon.

It would help if you pressed enter more. Nice storyline.

Awww more

There is a difference between being character transformed and character changed. Just pointing that out. Nice story though. C:

Please Update! I love the 'cute,considerate,kind,naive' part! It was soooo kawai! X3 *fangirl scream* Update faster ;)

That was a funny Rimahiko moment, bath towel Rima. Hahahaha )

This is really good for a begginner. Just try dividing your text into paraghraphes so it doesnt look like a big block of text, and it will be awesome.

I love this story! Please update more!

Awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter! One request though, can you fix the sentences. It's hard to read them. Thanks!

...…HAHAHAHAHA TWO DIRECTION HAHAHAHA *puffs* ok ok I got my voice back but any who YAY! Another Rimahiko fanfic

Plz update soon with a cherry on top

Oh I noticed that you've been writing alot of chara nari, just don't forget about the chara changes cuz back when rima did a Bala-balance that was a chara change

Ciao ciao

hmmmm i love the plot its amazing

Let me get straight to the point.

The chapter looks like a big fat blob. The whole thing is mingled together, and it makes it very hard for the reader to even read it.

I scanned over the second and the last chapter, and I see you haven't progressed. Please take the advice and criticism that those other authors give you. It'll help you. Like, seriously.

I don't wanna appear rude or a bitch or anything of the sort, but take concrit seriously, because that is what I'd do if I were you.

I'm not much for giving out these, but if you really want to become a better writer, take all the advice you receive and gobble it up like a greedy pig.

It'll do you good. No joke.

Oh, and if you need anything else, just PM me so I can give you a few tips.

Keep writing~

Yo! Looks like this story got me... I already suscribed he he _ So I guess you'll be getting reviews from me :D... I expect another good chapter soon. I can't believe poor Rima got tricked lol. And looks like Nagihiko got to like our Rima-chan xD

Hope to read your story soon