i agree not nearly enough Lady Hawke and Merrill, Isabella might be fun but Merrill is perfect. and this was a very sweet story. you have Merrill's voice down pat.

Marian Hawke and Merrill is just adorable x3

Male Hawke and Merrill just doesn't go!

Merrill is just totally adorable, and her eyes are gorgeous~

D'awww that was so sweet I melted... n_n

Short but sweet - nice story :)

I like it. Very fluffy indeed, but with real seriousness to it as well (good thing - lends depth), and very in character for the both of them. It felt natural. Well done.

Awww cute.

I can't find anything wrong with it, despite what you say. Short and sweet and subtle. I hope you write more~