MDPM is awesome!

i wish it had been a little longer but it's pretty good.

Short and sweet. I like reading about the Carrows-especially about their sibling relationship-and I agree that they likely have some sort of negative family experiences in their lives.

Interesting! I never thought to imagine what their life could have been like, they're not characters I normally consider reading about. Great work, though, you did well :)

oooh, this is great! I've always thought these two would ahev ahd quite a close relasionship! You wrote it really well, adn made me feel really sad for them :(

Ugh, so sad... but it makes sense. It would take a childhood like this to make them turn out like that. This really worked.

An interesting one. As you say, people you don't normally see written so a brave attempt to gve it a try. What you can see is the loyalty they showed each other.

I never thought I'd feel sorry for Amycus and Alecto, but you really hit the right amount of sympathy in this. I love that you took two characters that are despised and gave them a background that evokes the readers sympathy. But of course no kid is born evil, how they're raised and their experiences shape who they become.

Really good.

I love this.

I love pieces that look deeper into "the bad guys" and I love the insight this gives to Amycus and Alecto. They're real, and relatable. Thank you so much!

That was wonderfully written. I even felt a bit of sympathy. :)

Um...wow. This was fantastic. I'm very, very impressed, I really...liked? this...this was SUCH a hard set to write, but you did it fantastically, I'm absolutely amazed. It's so hard for me to decide how I feel, because it's so ANTI everything we know and love about Harry Potter. hahaa really, really wonderful job!