| Reviews for Times Present, Times Past |
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yuritsudalove chapter 20 . 12/2/2017 Just coming back here makes me so nostalgic. I have read this fanfic just this year and the way you write and took charge over their universe while still been true to the character and true to the reality they lived in made me respect your work and through your work you. I have read some more histories of your making I continued to astound myself with the ways of your mind. Your are and amazing writer. And I can't compare myself to you which makes me sad 'cuz I really want to know what happened after this story but I can't come up to anything worthy. My only consolation is that you continue writing and continue publishing to the world your stories so maybe this one won't have the closure those who read it looked for but there'll will be more doors unlocked to go to. |
SentinelPrimeKnightOfCybertron chapter 20 . 10/26/2015 Great story! Loved the interactions between the teams. A moving piece that does a great job handling the emotions of everyone involved in a delicate the respectful treatment of Kat, rather than bashing her like some do. The finale was bittersweet for Jason and Kat and I hope they can find some happy ending. I can't help but think Tommy would be better off away from Angel Grove in light of everything that's happened. His friends are divided between loyalty to Tommy and their friendship with Jason. It would be interesting if the sequel, examines the formation of his relationships with Haley, Terence Smith, and Anton Mercer and how they change him into the Dr. Oliver of Dino for Tommy in canon he doesn't get either Kim or Kat. In the end, Tommy will end up alone on the path that will take him to Reefside and Mesogog. |
Plato chapter 20 . 12/31/2012 Did you ever write a sequel to this and if you did where can I find it? I really like this one and would love to see another one. |
TheTeaQueen chapter 17 . 4/7/2012 Why does Kat refuse to explore her feelings for Jason? WHY? You'd think she'd come to a realization before they even came back! And Jason... ugh... damn his sense of honor. I just want to smack them both. After what they've been through, there's no way things can go back to "normal"! |
TheTeaQueen chapter 12 . 4/6/2012 I freaking love you! Er, at least, this story. :-) I haven't read any of the reviews so I don't know if anyone else has done this but... I read only the Past up to Homecoming then went BACK and read only the Present. The stark difference between the times was startling, to say the least. 4 days? That's it? I'm REALLY feeling for Jason and Kat right now, and I can't WAIT to keep reading to see what happens. I can kind of guess why Kat was clinging to Tommy the way she was, the whole thing must've been so disorienting. But poor Jason. I love him. I wouldn't mind being sucked through a time hole and getting some "emotional relief" from him, hehe. ;-) |
KimJasonfan chapter 20 . 7/12/2011 This is a really great story, but unlike a lot of readers, I actually feel really bad for Tommy. He trusted them both, loved them both and this was how they treated him. No offence to anyone but I'm just a very big believer in that you should NEVER betray a friend in ANY way. In my honest opinion, he (Tommy) was justified in acting the way he did. Then again, that's just the Tommy fan in me speaking out. I can't imagine the REAL Tommy, the one in the show, acting this way, though. He's just too sweet and nice, in my opinion. Nonetheless, it's an awesome story. Keep up the good work! |
brankel1 chapter 20 . 4/30/2011 Kat & Jason make up. |
psycochick32 chapter 20 . 4/10/2010 This is really intriguing - I'm hoping that much like a couple of your other fics, this goes the way of Tommy/Kim, Jason/Kat in the next installment. *crosses fingers* I can't wait to see what happens; everything's so emotional! |
xScottx chapter 8 . 5/1/2009 Added to Authors alert then, hopefully I do like the sequel better then the last few chapters. |
xScottx chapter 20 . 4/30/2009 I can't see how you Kat can blame Jason for anything either, if anything she should be feeling guilty and Jason feeling the way she does... I just can't stand the last few chapters of this story. |
xScottx chapter 18 . 4/30/2009 You really shouldn't be making Jason burden the guilt, he shouldn't even feel guilty imo... |
xScottx chapter 16 . 4/30/2009 I don't see how Jason betrayed anyone, hopefully you won't start making him feel guilty for sleeping with Kat because 2 years is a long time and is understandable to do what they did... |
Merklin chapter 20 . 4/22/2009 ... ... ... Brilliant...but tragic... PLEASE TELL ME YOU HAVEN'T DECIDED NOT TO DO THE SEQUEL! I'm sorry, I love the story, but I can't stand the way things are now! I need closure! *breathes heavily* Right, any comments I could make about your writing would be the same I made when I reviewed Casting Stones. I love the way you develop the characters. And again, I loved the way the relationship between Jason and Kat progressed slowly, realistically, over time. Please, please, PLEASE tell me there's still a sequel planned! *shakes head* I'm sorry, when I read a story, I just let myself get swept away in it, it makes it so much more enjoyable. I loved Times Present, Times Past. I've got to say though, I want to force feed Tommy bits and pieces of his own vital organs. I know he's only that way because you wrote him that way, but how can he be so self-centered? They were gone for two years, never knew if they'd even get back, their newborn daughter DIED...and all he can think about is that they 'went behind his back.' That Jason 'betrayed' him. It enrages me. Jason's honor, and determination to think of his friends' and Kat's wishes and needs first, though, only makes me love HIS character all the more. Even if I HADN'T always liked Jason better than Tommy, I'd like him better in this. But the story on the whole, same rating as before, 10 out of a possible 5. My apologies if I seemed a little...energetic in the review. I told you, I let myself get swept away in the stories. And please, please let me know if you're going to follow through with a sequel, because I'll definitely read it. - Merklin |
BlackRoseFire chapter 20 . 2/18/2009 Good story. I can't wait until the next story. |
Anna chapter 20 . 8/23/2008 Must. have. sequel. Please? Fantastically written story, original plot, even correct spelling and grammar (usually not too much to ask, but then this is ). And more than that, this story had genuine emotional impact. I'll readily admit to crying when Jason and Kat buried Dorilene. So in conclusion, BRAVO! Please keep your readers updated on the sequel. Your set-up for "Times Past, Times Future" is perfect, and I'm on the edge of my seat! |