Reviews for Personal Business
Paradise the Librarian chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Nice story, love how you tied it in with the X series. I really feel foe X here, with Zero getting hurt (though I don't take it as seriously in the games themselves, as much as both Zero and Sigma have cheated death XD )
Little Kunai chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
This was a great story. I really liked it poor x I'm sure he n roll would be good friends
MegaBauer chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Wonderful! I loved this! You captured the peronalities of both Roll and the version of X from the episode perfectly here. This offers a great explanation why Zero wasn't in the episode. I especially loved Roll's line at the end.

Great work! Keep it up!
BlackRussian chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
I maybe one of the few who's neutral to the Mega X episode, largely due to the fact that I am no fan of the X series and therefore am not bothered by the character inconsistencies. However, I think you did a good job of blending both what the characters are suppose to be and fitting it in with how the Ruby-Spears universe interpreted them. Nice job. Unusual to see Roll and X interacting as well, that gave the story an interesting set up.
Kuraselache chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Very sweet! I didn't really like X from Ruby-Spears, but I blame the writers rather than the actual character. However, you've got him down wonderfully here, showing a nice contrast between 'moder' time and the future where X comes from, where the world is a much darker, more serious place. Loved the story about Zero, and X's comparison to Roll in them both being blond and wearing red. That was really cute, and stuck out in my mind a lot. I think this is one of the only stories I've ever read where X is talking to Roll, which is understandable considering they're both from different times. I always thought they'd get along pretty well though. Please keep writing more stories, you've done an amazing job with 'Control' and 'Personal Business', and think you'd continue to do an amazing job.