This was really lovely, I especially loved seeing a dominant Remus because so often it's the other way around. Your vignette structure was really effective, and the end wraps it up all beautifully.

This was SOOOOO depressing.

And also good. And well-written. But still saaad.

Oh...Wow. This is...amazing! It's short but had a profound effect on me, I think that because it's so short it feels more intense. I love the way you wrote the way they fell apart and that last line is so powerful! It is very believeable! (Sry if my spellings bad, I have dyslexia!) So...dunno what else to say but...wow...

This was lovely and I believe that if they did have a relationship then this is exactly how it would have been, unstated and unacknowledged, until it was too late.

Thank you for an excellent read.

I usually hate sad oneshots or stories, but this one's special. I like how you described the relationship they had. The story was believable and great. I especially loved how you ended it with that last sentence :)

You are a very talented author, not gonna lie. This story deserves to be showered with reviews.

*~CyilEib~*

I really liked this one-shot. It was sad to no end, but very emotional and understandable.

I have to admit, that I love a Sirius who is hurt by Remus and not the other way around. Personally, I always thought that Sirius is the more sensitive one of them, so what you made out of their lovestory just fits perfectly.

As I said, it as very emotional, you have a great style of writing, to produce feelings without the need of to repeat the same thing over and over again, which many authors (sadly) do.

So, great story, I think, I will look up a few other of your fanfictions now, if there are any other Harry Potter relatd ones ;)