Awe, she loves her some Marceline...

Man, that was hot and provocative.
I really dig PBxMarceline stories.

I wonder if the "Helplessly devoted" part was a reference to Grease or not. Still, this is quite an amazing read, very cleverly and beautifully written. I could read your stories all day, one day I might as well do just that.

Cheers.

so good!

exellent , love the scenerio and you wrote with such depth to each character that they feel greatly vivid . The last sentense " As ever, she couldn't bring herself to lock it" was incredible in ending the story

What do you mean implications? You always have those in your stories! Hell AT itself is full of them.

Oh my gosh, I adore this. The writing is beautiful and you've got their characters mastered. This little fic was truly hypnotic.

Well, that was semi-sweet. Nice.

So cute! Great descriptions, I can totally imagine this happening :)

Beautiful. Brilliant. Simply gorgeous.

I love how you noticed the smallest of details from the episode "What Was Missing". I didn't even think that! Yeah I was kinda curious but never really thought it thoroughly. That's so amazing _! I love your stories. Every single one of them :')

I agree, continue this! Hahahaha.

You should continue! I've yet to read a good fic of this ship cos it's very few and far in between. And you did it incredibly. You totally should consider writing a multi-chapter PB/Marceline fic!

I absolutely adore this. You should continue it, or make more. I love it.

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