Holy cow I really liked this story! Man, what I wouldn't have paid to see that last season.

Sorry this review is so much later than your last posting, someone favorited a story of mine and I usually check to see what other stories are their favorites.

Oh, and I really liked the part in the first chapter where he stopped reading a story because the author mixed up their and there. As we know, they're not the same. ;-)

very clever premise! quite a story! and beautifully written! good job!

Just found this story, thoroughly enjoyed it. The detail to character study was refreshing. Keep up the awesome work.

hello I read your impressive history

the way you write is very original and very exciting

I really liked your story

thank you very much for your imagination

:) :)

I absolutely LOVED this story and the length of it was perfect just long enough to finish the story without dragging it out and adding more things keeping it straight to the point. LOVED it

I loved it. I adored it. It was fantastic and I loved how rick didnt find kate awake and how it was just perfect.

I really enjoyed your story. I was so sorry to see it end. You captured the characters so accurately and I was almost as sad as Kate just reading it. I was kinda getting choked up myself. Pls write some more.

Kind of late with the reviews..forgive me..

First, I loved this fic. It was awesome.

Second, I love how i was reading a fanfic about a show where the main character was reading a fanfic written by his partner..

Third, I love how said partner "wrote" that fic. I feel like that is what she would write. (plus it was an added bonus that Castle was shirtless)

Fourthly, when Castle gets on to the couch with Kate, and she wakes up in his arms.. i was just *-*

I wish he would do something like that in an ep.

Finally, I love how you ended it. It wasn't too cliche or corny. Not too rushed... i thought it was fantastic.

I'm gonna make your day, because I really really really loved your story !

This is one of the first I've read in English, which isn't my mother tongue. I saw it on the Facebook page "Richard Castle's Heat Wave" an hour ago and I enjoyed the description so... I came on to read it !

I think the facts that Castle reads fanfictions and that Kate writes one are great, I would never have think about it.

But now that I tought about it... It would be great that Castle helps Kate writing.

Anyway, your story was very... romantic. I liked being in Castle's mind, it brings a lot of emotions. Being in Kate's mind would have been great too, but it would already be the same thing : she's waiting, she doesn't sleep, she's crying, she's thinking about him. Not very interresting.

Kate seems really... bad, but it's cool. I mean, this way Rick looks like a kind of hero, savig her from her demons.

I have a lot of things to say, but the most important thing you have to know is that your story is good.

Keep writing !

(And I'm sorry if there's any fault, I've been learning english for only 4 years)

Loved, loved. Loved this!

Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or funfacts, songs that the chapter reminds me of. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy ;p

Aaawww, they’re spooning on the couch

For keeping me warm with your body *grins

*squeals* they’re kissing

It was a cute story, intense at times. But I enjoyed reading it.

wow what I great story. Got to admit it is the best I have read on this site. well done and I hope you write some more castle stories

I'm so glad that they're working on being together. It isn't going to be easy, but the trip is worth it!

Thank you so very much for this lovely story. It was very well done, the characters' voices stayed true, and it had a great plot! I really enjoyed reading it and hope that you will write more Castle stories in the future! Good luck with your studies. :-)

This is the perfect ending to this story. I love the way that Kate hopes that Castle will be at the precinct, only to be disappointed, only to wake up in his arms a short time later. The way that he reacts to her insecurities is so sweet and so him. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.

i like it! i wish you continue this story