My goodness...That was...wow, I have no idea what to say. That was dark. I don't often read horror fanfiction but this one just kept me on my toes. I was absolutely hooked during the first chapter. I tip my hat to you, you brilliant writer!

Creepy as always but I can't stop reading it. Where's Cobb?

This is so dark, I love it! Eames is so sadistic and it fits him perfectly. I know this chapter is labeled finale, but the story isn't labeled complete. Hopefully there will be more of this because it's so good!

That was... (terrifyinghorriblebewitching arousingnauseatingawesomeawe ful) ...intense.

I'm bloody afraid of horror, and I cringed inside every single line, but I couldn't stop. Your story sucked me in in an honestly scary way, and guess what, I think I love it! *shudders* What did you do to me?

I think it's poetic justice, though damn horrifying. Arthur wanted Eames to be faithful to him, and he got exactly what he wished. "Be careful of what you wish for", indeed.

Thanks for writing this. I'm really looking for the next chapters. Please continue!

fucking diabolical. but that's why it's in my favorites now. Poor, poor Arthur. I was mad cause you were vague about the "lesson" Arthur received earlier. Kinda cleared it up at the end, but was it the same as the ending? Clarification would be nice, please and thank you (if you reply lol)

This whole story is like creepy cool on the highest level!

Poor Arthur! D: Eames is crazier than crazy.

Poor Arthur! D: Eames is crazier than crazy.

So, Eames is a zombie? No, a vampire. No, a...something I don't know. I'm loving this.

Whoa.

This is going to be an intense fic.

O_O oh my.

Glad to see another update. I know writer's block is possibly the worst thing in the world, but you've gotten through it! *yay*

Eames is such a sadistic, cruel bastard! A;LAKSDFJ! Poor Arthur, he's just trapped in this horrible, horrible nightmare.

Wow. This is so interesting. Cannot wait to see how it ends up.

oh god poor arthur. sounds like eames was like this even before he was killed abusive to arthur. so arthur was intoxicated once and eames made him drink a whole bottle. its all about eames trying to control arthur and keep arthur in control of himself or what eames thinks is control.

Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit...

So, I opened my email and saw that I had one message. As I was clicking on Inbox, I literally crossed my fingers thinking "Please let it be a Don Giovanni update". And, lo and behold, there it was. I actually cheered. :P

But, wowowowowow, this chapter was intense. I really have no idea where things could go from here, so I'm immensely excited to see what you do with this. It's really an excellent story so far. I'm truly loving it.

I feel like I should be ashamed by how madly in love with this fic I am.

I have a strange affinity for horror and craziness, and this just pushes alllll of my buttons in the best way possible. I cannot wait to see where the rest of this goes!