Huh nice one

don't worry too much about the M stuff, bc it's usually just people being Dickheads, not realizing that they don't have to read this stuff. I simply believe that they like it and are disgusted with themselves and report because they're ashamed. That's just my guess XD I like the story, i find it adorable that Tom wanted him to stay forever u

oh, so he's an elf XD that's a new one

Very rushed with no emotional attachement. All in all Boring.

Well the plot has mucho more to give...so go on! ¿Please?

I have a small idea for the next chapter, Tom sits on a throne I. Front of the table where his followers sit, yes? Well have Harry (who I think should be Hadrian since Harry was the name given him by the bad tart manipulating dumbles) giving Tom a blow job during a meeting for all the followers to see, and then have bellatrix explode in a fit of jealousy, he'll even literally if you like. Just BOOM.

:) Like it!
if you like Tomarry, you should try Lucirry (Lucius/Harry). It's also good as a threesome (LV/LM/HP) , but you have to go digging in the Harrymort section to find the good ones.

Great I loved it

NOOOOOOOO! You do NOT end a super hot, awesome plot line there! You do not!

Why not have harry living with tom, doing that random jumping, and learning, then Sending him back to hogwarts to manipulate the manipulator whilst playing the manipulated

I don't like that saying; that makes me friends with a lot of nasty peeps... But this is a good fic, regardless of my dislike for that particular saying

Wow! How could I have overlooked this story until now? Great story, awesome chemistry, and very good writing!

Tom's going to need his energy XD

I like Tom/Harry only in very specific situations. The most important being: Tom not being a snake all the time (so either glamours or morphing or less horcruxes) and either Harry or Tom switching sides/points of view (meaning somebody, like Dumbledore, needs to be evil or wrong). You'd be surprised how little stories I can find that have this :(

So thank you for writing one of these stories
It's the only way I can enjoy this paring...
SL

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I liked it but i think it needs to be an actual story. It would be even better if you got a bit more in depth. But i really liked it. I would read it again. ;)