Haha! Awwww cute...

Haha.

I like this a lot, its written well.

Aaw! That's adorable! I love it!

Beautiful story. Beautiful section titles. Beautiful emotion. Frankly, this is a really incredible story about friendship, and is quite touching at the end. What you've got here is amazing, and don't let anyone tell you differently.

I really liked this. I love the idea of Lily being friends with the rest of the Marauders and them being their own little group. I love the idea of Sirius and Remus being so brotherly with Lily, it'd be great to have friends like that

i really liked this :) well written and i love the relationship between lily and sirius, it's exactly how i think sirius would have reacted to lily and james' relationship.

Aww! I love this :) I really thought that was Snape at the beginning! 10 outta 10

Haha love Lily in this :)

aww! nice story :D

Lovely ending. Well done :)

You're An Amazing Writer, I Love It.! .

This was beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed the update!

Er- How can you not love this? :O

It's like... Totally fantasticalmazing! (yeah I know it's not a word but I couldn't find a suiting word XD) I really love love love it! It was so sweet of Sirius! :))))

Are you sure this is the end? :(

- alwaysapotter (SaraHunterOfArtemis)

I liked it! I think after Sirius warmed up to Lily he would be an excellent brother figure in her life. I love how Lily said I love you to James though, to ruin his 'surprise'...that was funny!

I really like this story! I always wondered how Sirius would feel to Lily and James randomly becoming a couple when she claimed she hated him. And your writing is absolutely wonderful :)