,scarred and limping..? Oh no .Tracey will LOVE madeye moody

This is a great start to a Slytherin Harry Potter AU.

Here’s hoping it is continued someday.

Really funny thing, on the first chapter, I skimmed a few Paragraphs, and saw the vault number 713. Then I look up on my phone and it’s. 7:13 AM. And I just felt the need to share this. I haven’t even read the fan fiction yet, but I’m sure it’s good.

Right.
I was going to give this a go.
But that robes and skull mask bit at the top just ruined it for me.

It was a really stupid choice to include.
If such a thing was something that happened, Draco would be a different character in canon.
Adding such a thing has to many ripple effects to be plausible.

Your summary made this seem like there was only one point of divergence.
This looks to be like an AU.
You should put it in your summary that you're gonna muck around the universe to fit your narrative.

What a waste of time it was to read only as much as I did.

so did Riddle go through the ritual? hmm, they would trust a muggle's child back then? seems unlikely. However it also seems extremely unlikely [as it seemed in canon] that Dumbledore didn't know and it's another ruddy test for Harry

cool

This is great.

Shame this hasnt been updated in nearly 3 years, i really enjoyed reading it

Hahahahahahahahahaha! I hope this reaches the third year.

This is a really interesting take on Slytherin House and needs to be continued.

However, if you have Harry consorting with so many Gryffs and exhibiting canon-like behaviour, the story will become unsatisfying. Slytherin!Harry needs to internalise Slytherin values without becoming a blood purist and apply those values to everyday life. Otherwise, there is no reason to have him in Slytherin.

Furthermore, you really need to check your spelling before posting. Typos make my eyes bleed.

its a shame that this wasnt continued.

I wonder what the slytherens will think of harry's ability to speak to snakes?

I can totally imagine slughorn jumping at the chance to take an 11 year old hero under his wing, nice job progressing the AU from there

Are you ever coming back to this?

This is a fantastic story and the first three chapters are unlike any other story I have read. I sincerly hope that you do plan to continue with your story, as it is among the best stories on this site, despite still being very short.