God damnit that was so cute! I couldn't stop myself from squeaking and flayling through that whole fan-fiction!

amazing

That was such a cute fluffy angst story. I really enjoyed it.

I absolutely adored this story! I found it in a community yesterday and I've read it every chance I've gotten since then till I just finished it. Your story was flawlessly executed and one or the best Sherlock fics I've read in a while. Awesome job! 3

Great fic

I'm usually reluctant to read teenlock, but you've gotten me intrigued here :)

Omg Sherlock's poem was so beautiful! I have to admit I got tears in my eyes when I read it. I really liked this story, you captured their emotions and thoughts very well :)

awh this was a really adorable story i stay up till 1 AM to read it woohoo !

slight mistake in the continuity, john asked sherlock if he'd ever had a sleepover two separate times. not sure if that was supposed to be purposeful but eh. loved the chapter

wow i really love how real you make the characters seem, and make their flaws apparent without it being obnoxious.

i feel like john's dad is abusive from this chapter, because of how his mom acts and how john's always putting himself down for things that don't really matter, e.x. "fucking queer mind" in reference to himself... i love it wow it's only the first chapter

YOU'RE GREAT wow i look forward to the rest of this story and where it'll go

Oh gods, this is incredible! So accurate and fitting - it's still Sherlock and John, but younger and rougher around the edges, and it's just so in character, and I can't even. Just wow. Amazing.

It was believable how Sherlock was treated in school. I wish Mycroft could've made an appearance. Sherlock's poem about John was touching and nicely done.

That story was bloody brilliant. Gutted to see that it's finished. I read the entire thing today and loved it xx

That was a very sudden stop, but an enjoyable story either way.

I really like it so far. You've managed to really capture some of Sherlock's personality traits (like curling up into a ball when he's upset). I commend you.