This story is brilliant. Not only do you hit spot on how the mane six would approach sex, you capture all the complicated feelings about the mythical first time perfectly. HASBRO ought to make a cartoon version of this story to show in sex ed class - even though the lesbian BDSM scene might be a bit controversial.

Great story!

Oh Celestia! FlutterShy was going to rape Rainbow Dash?! LOL How insane!

"That's the spirit, Rarity!" Pinkie laughed, and nudged a few items on Rarity's bed. "Hey, I brought some of my special records – you want to eat ice cream, listen to ridiculous porn and make out?"

"No," mumbled Rarity, shaking her head. She then looked from her friend, to the tub of ice cream, to the small stack of records sitting on her bed.

"Alright, maybe a little bit."

I laughed so hard! XD
Also the whole Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash thing was AWESOME! I want to see more like this epicness!

Pinkie is a WHORE
Fluttershy is a freak

Once again TV Tropes leads me to something extremely awkward for me to read. I have GOT to stop following their links.

this is awesome!

... yeah, I lost it at dominatrix Fluttershy. I really, truly did.

I loved this so much!

Both Rarity and Pinkie Pie were totally in character and PP was so cute and funny.

Write more!

That was crazy. I guess I shouldn't be surprised that Pinkie is the wild one, but in between Applejack's euphemism and Rainbow and Fluttershy's relationship, this was just a very silly, awesome fic.

oh

my

god

i think i just burst a lung.

Well, this was a funny little one-shot!

Dr Hooves. That line.

Further proof that there's no party like a Pinkie Pie party. The only criticism I'll offer was that it was a bit too broadcast from the get-go that Rarity would end up seeing Pinkie for the bulk of the advice she needed. It was forecast a little too starkly the way she kept avoiding Sugarcube Corner. It made sense in-story, but hurt the narrative progression a bit, where at least some of Rarity's surprise (as this is her POV) needs to translate to the reader as well, even if the reader is justifiably more well informed in comparison to our unreliable narrator.

This is... brilliant. xD Absolutely brilliant. This is probably going to become my own personal headcanon now. Actually, it definitely is.

I can absolutely see Pinkie Pie doing something like this. Your characterisation, as I said before, is wonderful. I've always found Pinkie Pie to be difficult to write, because she's so... well... Pinkie, but you got her spot on, and Rarity too, who I also think is tricky. Even the others are excellent, and I just love all the little bits you put in, like 'Dr. Hooves' and 'Dominashy' with Rainbow Dash, which was unexpected, they're a really nice addition to the story (even though I don't particularly like the couple, I still think it was great. Fluttershy as a dominatrix somehow fits so well, even though it seems to be completely at odds with her personality at first glance).

So, yeah, hilarious and wonderful. Also, the last scene kinda makes me want to see some Pinkie/Rarity fanart, even though that couple would never ever have crossed my mind before. Haha.

This was a rather well done piece of fiction, and I love how sensitive to Rarity Pinkie Pie was. Of course, those last few lines really made me want to see a nice heartwarming Rarity x Pinkie shipfic.

What I think I really enjoyed most was the wonderful way you approached sex. That it's not bad, and that it's different for everyone or everypony, as the case may be. If shows pointed at kids and preteens could approach the topic of sex in such a way that you have done here, I believe that the world would be a better place in that respect.

Hah! Poor Rarity. Nicely done. Amusing characterizations; very entertaining to read.