It was wery interesting! I like it. Have you next story about The Master and her/doctor?

This is amazing! I love the way you write the Master and Jenny. This was a blast to read

truly brilliant, like the why you wrote about the thing between doctor and master. Although I kinda of hoped they get together... But this story just feels right. That is who they are, they fall apart once they love each other.

One of the best stories I've ever read, loved that Jenny was in it, though the ending was a little disappointing.

This story made me lose one night of sleep , take that as a compliment :D (I was a bit frustrated by the end though ) but Mortality took care of that :) (okay so I actually posted this review on mortality by mistake , it was meant for this story , though mortality did delayed my falling asleep too x) )

You're just nailing the Americans left and right. Even if I am one of them I find this absolutely halarious in a morbid sort of way. Thank you for the this entirely too great story.

The Master has discovered Pokemon.

I'd say it's very well written if I hadent just watched the source material. It's like: what if the master hadn't been shot, and the doctor was a woman through the whole series? Other than those things it's identical. Still I applaude the effort it took to copy it so perfectly and in such detail, with just enough different to tell you it isent just a script for the episode. The shuttle differences are intruiging, like a parallel universe.:o

Isn't there continuity errors here? What about missy? Or the current doctor? Ahh, probably haven't got there yet.

How are you even doing this? I just watched this episode earlier today!

*ahem* the master regenerates as missy a female regeneration of the master (lol the irony), as you can clearly see long, red nails as "someone" gets up from the fire Darth- I mean, the master was burned in.

lol literally just watched this episode. Exact copy of the season 3 3-part "Utopia", but the doctor is female. Litarally takes script of episode and substitutes "he" for "she".

I like your alternate ending to the LotTL episode, your solution was simple, albeit less epic, but definitely more effective and made much more sense than what RTD gave us (which was disappointing in my opinion). I have been trying to find/think of a better ending to that episode for ages, and here it is (although in this version the Doctor is female, something that didn't happen in the show, but great conclusion, nonetheless). Bravo!

I can honestly say that I loved it. I enjoyed every moment. You truly write well and your plot was very good, the way you altered the original facts a little bit here a little bit there and in the end that changes were very significants. I liked the end, the River Song! Master I would love to read more about it.

"Well this is different." I giggled so much over that! It reminds me of Cassandra from New Earth