| Reviews for Modern Major Mary Sue |
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   PBIceCream chapter 1 . 1/17/2018 Bwa ha ha ha! Oh, isn't this the truth? Unfortunately, people seem to be embracing Mary Sue's these days. To each their own, I guess... Absolutely brilliant, thank you! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2016 You've nailed Mary Sue-ness, and this song is a great vehicle for your theme and your humorous treatment of it. The lyric doesn't scan, though. The number of syllables in a line doesn't always line up with the original, and the accents often fall on the wrong syllable. A little tweaking of the sentence structure would set it right and make it eminently singable. |
| ErinMilne chapter 1 . 7/8/2016 Not exactly following the model of the original, but a good laugh nonetheless. I will keep this in mind when creating new characters. Tarantara from... what is it, the third Sergeant to review this?! |
| zeebazeebaeata.ellac chapter 1 . 6/9/2015 I love this! I'm a huge fan of this operetta. This would make my voice teacher laugh so hard. :) |
| teeth8904 chapter 1 . 3/18/2014 OMFG THAT IS SO AMAZING. IM DOING THIS OPPERETTA RIGHT NOW AND JUST OMG. |
| A Lyrical Dreamer chapter 1 . 1/25/2014 Hilariously Brilliant! |
| Serpina Silver Tongue chapter 1 . 12/10/2012 Nice Sue parody. Amusing. Love Pirates of Penzance. |
| HSGisME123 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012 I would have sung along, but I was laughing too hard. You deserve a hi-five, a major applause (possibly with standing ovation), and *checks pocket* I don't have five dollars, but have a dollar and... twenty seven cents in change! You are brilliant, and a genius for writing this. Also, for the bravery it took to write this. |
| Mrs.Potter1989 chapter 1 . 4/8/2012 I love your story it was so well great Love, 1989 |
| StarkidWolf chapter 1 . 3/26/2012 This is hilarious! I just starred in my school's performance of Pirates of Penzance Junior, and I am astonished to see that yours is the only pirates of penzance story I have ever read. The Seargeant gives a hats off to you! *Tarantara* |
| FeelingCrossToday chapter 1 . 3/22/2012 You might as well stick a stamp on me and mail me to Ecuador! Genius! This is great, thanks. This song lends itself so well to Mary Sues. And, for the record, I did manage to sing it all the way through xD |
| mrslukecastellan chapter 1 . 12/15/2011 My school is actually doing The Pirates of Penzance right now, and I actually started singing this instead of the real words! NO JOKE! I got addicted. Fabulous! I loved this. |
| JenJo chapter 1 . 11/13/2011 lol. wow, you captured the essence of a mary sue. and had me reading it in time with the song. wow, well done |
| vengegates chapter 1 . 10/19/2011 This is actually quiet brill-i-ant! I tried singing along but i got tongue tied :s... Excellent :) |
| Jaeme chapter 1 . 10/5/2011 AAAAAAAAAAAAAH! I LOVE IT! I laughed so hard coz we did this musical last year and I was the Sergent and it was funny and fun :P The Jazzmeister XD |
