I do love a soldierward. Or in this case Veteranward. I thought I had read every military twific I was so glad to find this story. It had a real twist with some canon characters. Very entertaining and well written, your characters were adorable. Edward truly deserved the HEA he got. Thank you for writing this story.

I love the premise of this: ie Bella and Jake siblings, Edward and Jake friends in combat. Bella’s attitude really bothered me at first. I see her mellowing but there still isn’t a good reason for it for the audience yet but I’m hanging in there. Being patient. James is another issue altogether. Maybe it’s because my work has a no tolerance policy but that man has crossed into sexual harassment territory. Sort of funny at first. He’s beyond annoying to me now. I hope that’s what you were going for. Looking forward to more Edward. And I love Charlie and Sue. Hoping we find out about what Embry did soon that warrants so much hostility from Bella.

It was really long, long, long time when I last cried while readding fanfic. But this chapter made me cry, broke my heart a little

I'm in awe! This is so beautiful and well-written. When I asked for a military Edward story, this one was recommended. I have really enjoyed it. Thanks to both of you.
Judy

What a lovely story! I truly enjoyed it.

This was amazing, though I do wish Embry would have accidentally gotten in a fatal car accident.

Damn, Carlisle is just trash.

CantyBilly do something? Since they are on tribal land, it should be okay for Harry to rip the “vampires “ apart and get away with it, everyone can blame the lead paint.

Yay! Edward redeemed himself.

Well...damn. Hey are just going to keep having sex until Edward can go all night long.

Yay! They are together! I love that Rosalie is shy and clumsy and that Angela is a slut in this story, and Renee as a a psycho stalker? Perfect.

What kind of incompetent pieces of filth let Embry get away with attempted murder?! Please tell me he will die horribly.

I was kind of hoping uncle Harry would try to bring the vampire stump to his family and light it on fire in front of them.

Bella is just beyond bitchy. Something horrible must have happened to her if she is so anti-men.

I found this story and I am just in love with it, especially James!