| Reviews for Little Ooman |
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Guest chapter 2 . 6/6 Is Kenzie biracial (half black and white)? |
darkakuma22 chapter 26 . 5/1 update. please.️ |
MCJwolflover chapter 26 . 1/3 Please update! |
sonic chapter 26 . 4/11/2019 I liked the chapter! |
SedaIlandereKaden chapter 6 . 6/27/2018 Found your story just now and have to say I love. You're asking for highlighting mistakes - I've noticed the most common ones: a mix-up between "they're", "there" and "their". Same with "your" and "you're", "knew" and "new", etc. Not so many others, you have really a great writing style and there's a lot of action scenes so far, which I love. In case you're interested in a quick beta-read and correcting out the small rare mistakes, let me know, I'd be be happy to help out even if the story's already a bit older. I definitely think it deserves a lot more attention and favs/reviews. Keep up the good work! |
belladu57 chapter 26 . 6/9/2018 Very good |
Kendara Adams chapter 19 . 6/3/2018 I am so sorry for your loss. Yours is one of the top yautja stories I re-read. I look forward to the new chapters ! |
eveyssoul chapter 6 . 2/19/2018 Viper sounds damn hot and is sneaky. Lol |
eveyssoul chapter 4 . 2/19/2018 How is Kenzie doing all this when she has been impaled?...kudos on the different story line! |
ulmiina chapter 24 . 11/29/2017 Thanks, this is a lovely story and I like it a lot! |
xosha chapter 24 . 11/5/2017 this story is so cute! I love it! love everything about it |
write more soon chapter 24 . 10/24/2017 write more soon |
Khalthar chapter 23 . 10/9/2017 And the Little One makes three! |
Guest chapter 22 . 9/15/2017 I love this amazing. |
KyloRen'sgirl213 chapter 1 . 9/1/2017 Love this work I am enjoying this work |