I love this. I think you've captured the nuance of their relationship beautifully.

Very beautiful writing. My favorite drabble was the fourth one.

I think you pictured them quite well, with little reference to destiny and light and the future. I like that you showed Saiou only wishing to help Edo (and not as a psychotic villain) :D

Wow. I didn't think that anyone would still write Edo x Saiou fanfictions. But I'm glad you did! I liked your ideas, the meaning were deep and they held much power in each and every word.

You don't waste any time in uploading. I'm glad to see that such a great writer is this active!

Just one little thing: In the 5th drabble, should it say "Pale hands gripped the "railing",? Just wondering about that.

Anyways, your story is well-written as usual and the idea is extremely original, which is something that we can all admire.

I enjoyed this story very much and I eagerly await your next fanfiction.