This is awesome! If you made me cry then you did a good job, I NEVER cry you think maybe you can turn this into an actual story? Or maybe a sequel? You have me interested.

i died

This left me crying! Please write another chapter!

Wow... that was incredibly angsty... I LOVED IT

it is very sad, but i like it at the same time. and why was she running away, i didn't understand completely? did Carter try to propose, because it mentions a ring? and what does Zia think she did wrong? But other than that i loved it

That's just sad. *sniff sniff sob sob* just very sad...

I hate you so much right now.

You. Made. Me. Cry.

Grr.

Anyway, because you reduced me to tears, it means that this was reallyreallyreallyreally good :) Keep up the writing.

I love it, but it really makes me sad. Very in-character.

YAY FLAME! I always like your stories. I didn't know you were working on Kane Chronicles (I like that series, do you?)! Nice job!

I love a good angst. Well written, Flame-a-saurus.

Oh my gods. Flame, this was amazing as always... WHY DO YOU WRITE ANGST THOUGH? YOU WOULD DO AWESOME IF YOU WROTE HUMOR EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE!

OMG THAT WAS AWESOME! sad, but AWESOME!

*slaps Zia repeatedly* BAD ZIA. BAD ZIA. BAD ZIA. YOU LOVE CARTER. SO FREAKING ACT LIKE IT.

I personally loved it. Angsty Zarter is my favorite, at the moment, with cute and fluffy coming in second. LOVE IT! :D

~T

Loooooooooooove it!