The story started off good but get hella annoying as it goes on... Especially at the part where Harry decided to not tell sasuke the truth or even try to help him with his trauma.. I mean that kid literally had been mentally tortured for god knows how long and and Harry just pretend that he's gonna be okay?.. Man, thats eff up. Also the fact that everyone suddenly call him Harry and not his given name, I mean what's the reason of giving him a brand new name then if u just gonna use the old one. Also don't like that fact that Harry been acting like a naive idiot who go around telling ppl his secrets when he in truth is actually a few hundred something something old 's also hell lots of grammar mistakes which I dont really care bout cuz I'm not that good either, but there's so many I just can't ignore it anymore. Not to mention the misspellings of character names, and the format of the name's keeps switching between Western and eastern. Imma drop this excrement cuz it totally not worth having my brain cell cease to exist just to read this.. No offence btw

there's was no need to have harry tell them about the pain and suffering of his other life.
I'm forgetting it

I really feel disappointed that mc/Harry chose to reveal all his cards like that. You know with age comes maturity and they would give less sh*t to give. Harry being several hundred years older and seen so much deaths would have face every kind of ordeal humans are capable of as MOD.

Seeing him like a child to gain recognition from hokage or Danzo is like 30yr old trying to show of his skills and gain approval from 10yr old. I felt really sad, I just lost interest in reading the story entirely cause mc/Harry would never be mature and would keep doing mistakes to extend the plot.

Like revealing the truth about Itachi and "confessing" his betrayal without even scanning or even helping his brother out from the nightmare just to teach him a lesson like Itachi tortured him in genjutsu.

I loved the very beginning of the story and suddenly everything went sour but it's just my opinion and my review. Thanks for the fic. I loved till the previous chapter.

The story just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. It is like it is going against Harry Potter and naruto. By the death is still death in all religion. There are death gods quote but a death god has no power over death. Death rules over everything.

Honestly this is some sad shit like how he's being manipulated by a higher being into teaching him suffering and despair of a higher level cause that's all I see Harry being nurtured into Death or a higher being still sad shit he's lost everyone already Itachi is next I want him to Snap it's not realistic for someone to not snap especially an Uchiha like him

disgusting...u change absolutely nothing...lazy retard ...why bother writing then?

I thought Harry's new name is Haru. Why would the Uchiha call him Harry? Not to mention, they're Japanese and Harry is an English name they've never heard of.

Haru asking forgiveness for his clan is beyond ridiculous. The hokage failed, let him learn and suffer his failings as he did with naruto. A dictatorship would have gotten rid of those plotting behind his back but he forgives their horrible acts because he is weak willed and idealistic. Both sides were wrong. The village and the clan but only the clan is being punished. Im stopping here as haru is to idealistic and forgiving. Some things should not be forgiven. Death is needed where life grows. But haru is to "pure" to "soft" that the limited childish view your trying to push as mature is eye rolling inducing. Ninjas are all abt the grey of the world but retarted immature characters like naruto n now haru do not make the stories interesting they make it shallow and boring. Great writing style though. Haru progressed way to young and his immature view for one so old in spirit leaves me with little hope of a character who explores the grey rather then turning it into a childs show where butterflys should not be eaten by the spider. Because fuck nature and its laws. Hold hands and sing friendship songs.

Really crappy grammar. Learn what contractions are for the love of God.

It should be possible to use any release, even if you don't have the bloodline for it. All it does is give the person an instinct on how to do the release combination subconciously. A person should be able to do the same if they research it and have godly chakra control and talent.

hot dang! I gotta say.. the quality of part 2 is wayyyyyyy better than part one... the fight sequence are way bloodier and realistic.. the story way more complex and the characters almost real... keep up the good work :D

dismissing yuugi's feelings about the upstagement is a dick move.

Quick question, over the centuries of Harry's life, why has he never even looked at the cover of astrategy book? Because he doesn't use tactics. Ever. He spits fire when necessary, but that's it.

Is Harry breaking up with Death? OMG

Awwww. Sasuke and Itachi are adorable when they're not angsty.

Also, here's hoping there's no massacre this time. Or at least no Danzo helping push the cart into hell.