Agreed. This is out of character! He would NOT avoid the woman he loves for no dang reason!

O_O
Holy shit.
Holy fucking shit.

I...
Bloody hell.

that was...

uh...
sexy?

Its out of character :(

pfffftt. Poor Ponds XD seeing...that in the morning *snerk*

Just look at the floor. Everything's normal on the floor. :D

YASSS! Any chance of continuing? I was very concerned at first that Rose was going to be unhealthy for the Doctor, but glad it turned out happy!

Brilliant concept and I wish that there was more.

Cute! And funny

This is hilarious!

XD

...I'll have something to say about that as soon as I stop laughing. XD Oh, Rose!

I may never be able to rid myself of the mental image of Matt Smith covered in hickeys. Thanks ever so. *shudder*

Aside from THAT unsavory picture, I liked this story quite a lot! Totally new treatment of the whole "Rose returns" concept.

"Just look at the floor, Amy," Rory said, voice strained. "Everything's normal on the floor."

I can't handle how perfect a Rory line this is. It's really just wonderful, as are the Ponds' voices throughout.

In regards to the rest: very interesting indeed. It's a really cool concept that I've never seen before.

Haha! Interesting. I like how even ghostly-other worldly Rose still has Rose's voice.

I love the idea of this. The last chapter made me laugh so much!