What a "perfect" story. Such a cute idea; I really loved it!

ah. What a great story. I don't know much about Doctor Who, but this was wonderful. Glad you didn't split it up into separate chapters. i might not have read on if you had. Great work.

~Cregga

Beautiful. Extremely well-written and a wonderful insight into them both. Both Rose and the Doctor were completely in character throughout and the almost stream-of-consciousness style worked so very well with what the story conveyed. It was smooth enough to draw the reader along without ever being boring, which is tricky when you're essentially repeating most of the content. The ideas behind everything were solid and, it has to be said, absolutely adorable. All in all, a great read.

Oh, that was beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! What a marvellous idea! And ... it was perfect.

I have to especially commend this line - "She did not pull him away but only held tightly onto him, finding a safe anchor in the oncoming storm". LOVE IT! It's sort of a double-meaning-ish one, 'cause he IS the oncoming storm :D it was soo cool :D

Aw, and they went to Barcelona! That's awesome! They've got dogs with no noses :D (imagine how many times a day you end up telling that joke, and it's still funny!)

Well, that was just amazing. Thanks so much. I loved it.

This was very nice. I like how you connected the old and the new Who into one congruent Doctor. People sometimes forget the man he used to be before the Time War.

And as for the psychic connection, I wish my husband and I could do that :-p

Cheers!

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I really can't gush enough over this story. It really is your best work yet, I think!