| Reviews for When You're Feeling Empty |
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Rafaela Amanda chapter 1 . 5/9/2015 My God, that was really sad but amazing at the same time, the fraternal bond of them is unique and very strong Poor Sammy having to deal with these horrible memories of hell, so much torture and pain, incomprehensible to others But despite this bad situation, I like the older brother Dean overprotective mode, loved how he is dealing, helping and supporting his brother Vomiting, he an eye on Sam all the time, even at bath time, and the way he was concerned when he saw that Sam had left, and then wiping his hands And I liked the pro Dean Sam talking about the horrors he went in the cage, |
QuillsAndInk221 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014 Lovely little story. It really tugged at my heart strings! I love Leave Out All the Rest, it's a beautiful song, and you did a fabulous job of portraying it. Very good job! Inky |
ccase13 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012 The poor boys do so need a shower and a bed to sleep in. They are just so tired and sick. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2011 Good. True to characters. |
Soncnica chapter 1 . 9/9/2011 LOL this was cute, sweet and awesome and yeah you're right it had some depth in it too! :) not just Sam puking all over, which I liked too! and ya know... you really get hit by 'Dean is Sam's brother' when Sam pukes all over Dean and Dean's just fine by it... :) that really does show they are family! :) I mean I puked all over my friend once, and we're still friends... that just shows how strong the friendship is... but family is always stronger! anyways... I was at first a bit confused about WHY Sam escaped through the bathroom window, but then after a while I got it, so... yeah.. nevermind! and I was confused about why that guy came up to Sam so strongly, starting that bar fight... I was like: HUH? but then again, I know nothing about American culture and how people act in bars, because THAT would never have happened here.. so yeah... I can't comment on that, but say: erm okay *shrugs* BUT I really liked how you connected the WALL with the PUKING! :))) so awesome... really loved those small sentences of 'depth'! :) oh and the banter of course.. LOL... that was awesome too! it was a great fic to read late at night and just dive into the Sam being sick and wall coming down! tnx for sharing! hugs S. |
Ciya chapter 1 . 9/5/2011 LOL - Sam barfed on the jackass. Brilliant. Couldn't have happened to a better person. Love this line "Because they were supposed to be done, Sam and Dean, done with heaven and hell, and losing each other. They were just supposed to hunt things, and ride around in the Impala, and drive each other insane, leaving behind candy wrappers, and insults, and echoing banter." This is what season seven is to me. |
BranchSuper chapter 1 . 9/5/2011 Absolutely awesome. |
giacinta2 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011 Dear Mystic25, so glad to see another of your stories. I just love every one of them although the subject matter ( in this case "tangible" as in vomit )was unexpected...:-) As usual you depict their complex relationship so well and I am now officially addicted to your stories... Keep them coming, thanks, regards Giacinta |
Queen Bee chapter 1 . 9/4/2011 What can I say...this fic made me laugh out loud at some parts...and made me cry as well. Great job. Keep writing! |
d767468 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011 I liked it very much. Thank you for sharing. |
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 9/4/2011 Love this. |
Paulathe Cat chapter 1 . 9/4/2011 Can't help but think of these two whenever I hear that song. Never thought of puke though... ha! |
sylvia37 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011 You're killing me. I have to remember to have the tissues near me when I read one of your stories. Seriously, really good job, even if projectile vomit is not one the things that would normally make me want to read a story. Really excellent. |
Emmers224 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011 This is amazing! A healthy dose of brotherly hurt/comfort schmoop to make my night. Thank you. :) I needed it! Also, Sam projectile vomiting all over that guy is just plain awesome. The guy deserved it. Points for creativity and pure genius! Lol |
SPN Mum chapter 1 . 9/3/2011 Awww man! You did it again! I swear, every time I read one of your stories, no matter how long or short, I experience TONS of emotions! Happiness, sadness, sorrow (not the same thing as sadness), joy, thankfulness for siblings, and most of all...love. You really nail the emotion and connection between the brothers. That's why I love your stuff so much! :D Thanks for another heartfelt story from the Sam and Dean saga! Peace! |