This is cute. And I like it.

I APPROVE OF YOUR STORY CHOICE

NO, SERIOUSLY, IT'S AWESOME.

I loved this. I hate that there aren't many Van Kliess stories out there. Even if he is the "bad guy", I have always had a soft spot for him and I think that you wrote him well.

Ame este capítulo

Hi, I didn't read this at first because it wasn't finished and I wasn't sure if it would ever be finished. I have to say it's well written and very touching. It definitely is a different take than other stories out there. It's good though. Nice job.

Al parecer Cesar no esta de acuerdo con su amistad . Por favor seguir escribiendo esta gran historia llena de recuerdos profundos :)

Es un capitulo lleno de emociones , la promesa de Van Kleiss ... Sigue escribiendo :)

That was a awesome story please continue please I really loved it even if its not finished yet lol but still continue please and thank you

I agree that throughout the series Kleiss did know something and this was a nice short sweet story.

i like it

Please make another chapter this was a really good one.

i think its awesome! keep going please?!

You did a very good job with this character. The way that Caesar and Van Kleiss interacted in this chapter I could see happening in the show.

My heart really goes out to Van Kleiss. I hope and long for a third chapter to this story.

i dont hate it i love it it is very sweet

i thought it was nice and sweet very well done keep it up and keep being awesome