Well, I am not usually into Lucy X Loke, but the story was awesome. Good work.

It's so beautiful. I'm glad I found this before reading Lion's Pride. Well done

Wow! What a beautiful lolu story! I like it keep writing more of it

I was just about to start reading Lion's Pride but was looking through your fics and saw a prequel! Happy day! This was awesome! I'm even more excited to read the main story now.

I love LoLu, and I think you captured that crack-ship really well! I loved reading how they got together. This was so cute! I'm glad that some of the Spirits approve of their relationship. Capricorn certainly approved. Lynx somewhat approves, haha. I'm sure that the Spirits all would approve as long as something bad didn't happen that would strain their relationships. _

LOVE IT!1

2015 and i re-read this story all over again 3

I've always thought of Pegasus as a she.

I've always thought that the celestial spirit king was Cepheus.

Pervert Varjo.

I started with reading a lion's pride and read where you mentioned this story being the prelude and I thought huh I'll check it out before I continue reading this one. And I really really enjoyed it! It actually left me looking forward to see where it interlinks with a lion's pride. I loved the butt kicking Loke and the gentle caring Loke and now I'm going to go read more lion's pride!

Your writing is amazing. I loved every single moment of this. You have some serious talent and the stars are always interesting to read about. They are absolutely fascinating.
Loke/Lucy is close to my heart so this great

It's nice to know that there is ONE good Loke/Lucy fanfic out there, apparently with a sequel? Yup going to read that now!

I absolutely love your writing and Loke's nickname for Lucy is so cute whenever he says it i literally 'awwww' out loud! Although, your killing me with the one-sided graylu (especially in Lion's Pride)! I also just want to comment on how you can pull the minor events that never make an impression (Like Loke having that date and sending in Virgo as his replacement) and turn them into a wonderful little add on for the story. Every time i find one i literally comb through all the anime and manga just looking for the scene to watch/read it again! Great work, as an avid reader and fellow writer i'd like say your writing style is great (not to mention you really stick to the characters) and your plots are thrilling.

This chapter was beautiful! Awwwwwwwwwww :)

I read Lion's Pride a while ago, and now I understand everything perfectly!