It's nine years old, but allow me to say that this is how a fanfic ought to be written. Excellent grammar, and an excellent grasp of who the characters are and how they would react in a given situation. This is totally something I could see happening in this universe. Well done.

This story is so incredibly cute and sweet, I love it!

hilarious! spot on characterization.

Haha this is so awesome I just couldnt stop laughing. And you got humorous Hawke so perfectly right, it could have been an ingame quote.

This is absolutely adorable and I'd be 100% on-board with merrill solving the world's problems with kindness and straight-forward Dalish-style common sense.

This was the best Dragon Age story I've read in a very long time! I've laughed so much, you characterisations were spot on, and the whole thing was just lovely! Thank you for writing and sharing!

This was beautiful.

I dont care if this never happened in the game, its canon to me now. That was adorable and hilarious.

I absolutely loved this story.

- Playing Imagine Dragons' "I Bet My Life" in the background
- Faith in humanity restored
- Smile on my face after reaching the end of the story
Beautiful fic.

Wonderful and sweet! Merrill was beautifully characterized, as were her companions at the end, and the story was beautifully crafted. Thank you for an excellent read!

This was a richly entertaining read. I was surprised and pleased by the characterization of the burglar and how the pecularities of Merrill helped flesh out the situation for the fic. Excellent oneshot.

Lovely, you got Merrill pegged.

Merrill, oh Merrill.
Never change, Merrill.
The sad thing is, I can imagine her doing that...
Nicely written!

How utterly delightful!

Also, this is the best Merrill I've ever read.