Reviews for The Breakup
SummerMistedDragon chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
awwwwwwwwwwww This chapter was the best but man number three with all the songs wow! Man I love the Botosphere!
Disappearing Pucca chapter 2 . 1/14/2015
Flute is in band not orchestra thought you should know
PENNandBLAKE chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Love it please continue
Jessie07 chapter 4 . 10/17/2011
Cool story! I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update soon!
easilyaddicted17 chapter 4 . 10/17/2011
Awww! So cute! PLEASE update soon!
FatesShadow83 chapter 4 . 10/8/2011
Awwww!

Lovely!
RK-Striker-JK-5 chapter 4 . 9/26/2011
Rough ride there for the couple. Glad it worked out in the end. :D And yes, Sam is the future Prime... and still a high-schooler. :p
luinrina chapter 4 . 9/24/2011
Boy, am I glad to no longer be in high school. With all those "who's going out with whom" and "who's allowed to sit with whom during lunch" you'd think the kids had nothing better to do but worry about reputation and image. In a way it's sad to see that Mikaela broke all her friendships in order to stay with Sam, but in retrospect: were those girls really her friends? If they aren't able to respect Mikaela's choice to go out with Sam instead of with Trent, then they don't earn the right to call themselves friends. A true friend sticks to you, for good and for worse. The same applies to Miles. Certainly, Sam wasn't exactly nice to Miles after that sneeze, and Sam and Mikaela spent more time together than using it to see to their other friends, but it still doesn't really excuse Miles to "break up" with Sam like he did. In that regard Miles is no better than Mikaela's former girl"friends".

Sam waiting for Mikaela with a flower bouquet was positively cute! How did Mikaela say in "In the Beginning": "her man and her 'bot." So true, so true. And 'Bee causing a little mayhem with Grandma Banes! :D You just gotta love that scout. There's no better friendships for Mikaela than with Sam and 'Bee after everything they went through, and I'm glad they got to stick through all the high school drama together. I momentarily feared Sam would be devastated when Mikaela first cracked her famous sentence of "I'm going to break up with you, Sam." :D So great to see Sam recognized the joke she's been making. If anything, it welded them together even tighter than before.

Excellent story. :) I want more!
fullhans1 chapter 4 . 9/23/2011
Good story.
Riptide2 chapter 4 . 9/22/2011
So that's where the 'I'm breaking up with you.' thing came from! Nice to know. I agree with Sam killing evil Decepticreep Lords has its perks! I guess I knew the blow up was coming but I did not expect it like that! It's such a real world situation that it seems completely real and wow Maria is such a... jerk? If that's the right word? I take back what I said about her and Leo making a good couple! It's just insulting to Leo! I really liked Sam trying to impress Gran and he's right he'd better not go around hurting little ol' ladies or the Boss Bot will not be happy!

I really was wondering why Miles wasn't in the second movie, guess I know now! Mikaela is totally right though, Sam can be such a little girl. I really liked how he seemed to have "grown up" a little in between the first and second movies, so part of the reason I didn't love TF3 was that they threw him straight back into the hyper-active, talking-a-mile-a-minute, and slightly crazed Sam of parts of the first movie. I guess it just goes to show just how big of an effect Mikaela has on him! (Even if the hyper-active Sam make of a great laugh!)

I absolutely loved the last scene! Sam and Mikaela are so cute together (Take that Carly!) and it was just so ...sweet!

Can't wait for an update, as usual! Keep up the amazing work!

P.S. I completely agree with you about Optimus' of humor. I read so much where he's... well you summed it up pretty good when you called him 'Mr. Responsibility' in Plans and it's nice, no better then nice, amazing to see him actually kind of goofy around. I especially liked Sam and Optimus taunting each other at the end of 'Plans'!
Hittocere chapter 4 . 9/21/2011
I can't squee this time, I squeed so much I broke the squee machine and my dogs whined at me. I can grin from ear to ear though, so I shall proceed to do so *GIANT GRIN*

I like how it's all leading back, I also like the hyperspace talk and how you decided to go about discussing Miles' desertion. I had always wondered what happened to them, but I wonder if there will be limited contact later on. Like some random holiday email greetings or something...

Gran was an interesting character, but I can say this much, I didn't much care for her. I think however that was partially your intention. I like how its wrapping up, my favorite part was 'Bee quoting Ironhide and Optimus from the first one.

I'll see ya next chappie.
femme4jack chapter 4 . 9/21/2011
It is fascinating to start seeing the side of Sam that truly irks me in the second and third movies.

While, my Miles head muse would never abandon his bro, it makes sense, and really helped Sam see just how much Mikaela has given up for him. On the other hand, considering the quality of the friends, she hasn't lost much. Miles and Allison, on the other hand, seem like a real loss.

Wonder what Bee is thinking about all of this High School Drama? Is he watching teen movies to help figure it all out?
LT-NightWarp chapter 4 . 9/21/2011
Whaa? Miles is ditching Sam? that would explain his dissapearance from further movie (like bay as NEVER drop any character before..)
RK-Striker-JK-5 chapter 3 . 9/20/2011
I'm a bad reviewer. Sorry. :( Real life got in my way a bit. Anyway, loved the songs. :) Sam and Mikaela were great here, too. Loved the build-up to them on the hilltop.
Harm Marie chapter 4 . 9/20/2011
Liked this.
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