HAHAHAHAHA. Perfect!

(I can suggest another person besides Watari or Mogi or Ukita to do the job:
Matsuda. He's awesome with a gun :D)

So basically, this is a vessel for you to express your blatant dislike for Mary Sues. It's an untypical Sue-bashing story that actually makes sense. I credit you for that. Yay.

I liked it, it made me laugh. As for it being not "so much as humorous as it ws snarky," I find that snarkiness is its own brand of humor, and what a delightful brand it is. Good job.

Very nice! I was actually looking for an Inception/DN fic but couldn't find the category (cuz there isn't 1) [

Very nice! I tought you would go into more detail with the lower level Sues like maybe angsty, angel, anti- Sues, godmods, etc. but i really o like this. I found it funny, in its ouw weird, not funny way.

and yeah, its really hard to write for death note without getting a sue on your first try. Especially if its a wammy kid, because then you have to make sure there's faults and that their "wammy addiction" isnt too "normal" or clique. cool story anyway!

Really good job and... I found this story funny...

This was an awesome 'WHAT NOT TO DO guide.'

I'd love to hear the opposite side of the spectrum: What makes Gary-Stu's, Gary-Stu's.

XDDDDDD

This is why I love you.

Non-yuriz!

...I think you might have broken the 4th wall there, actually. Like, if you had a drill, the tip of the bit just barely poked through.

Or maybe you were completely on the other side.

Something like that...

I thought this was utterly brilliant. I hate the whole 'exaggerated-Sue-parody' with a raging passion, mostly because it's been done to death and it wasn't that funny of a concept to begin with. Now, this on the other hand, was amazing. And now I want to try a crossover of DN and Inception (don't ask me how the hell that would work...) Either way, very nice job with this! Thanks for writing!

I loved how you combined Inception with Death Note! It gave the story an extra burst of weirdness and randomness (which is great to have in a parody!) )

I love reading stories like this that "unveil" Mary Sues for what they really are: annoying, boring, and overdone. Very refreshing and funny at the same time.

Thanks for the read!

I've never heard of Inception, but this has got to be one of the best MS parodies on here that isn't on hiatus or dead. It's definitely something I've been needing to see after the past few days I've had!

Were any of these Mary Sues based on any actual OCs you've seen on here? Just curious. C:

I liked it. I thought that you were going to make level three the actual unchanged characters acting OOC as sues though. You covered that in the end of level 2 though.

I guess that you are right, overdone sue-parodies are in themselves a genre.

there are only three level? Aw...

Well if you put it that way, then i guess you're right! I mean, obviously OCs always make conflics. Hmm...

But... Can a self insert be a mary sue?

I actually still laughing

Not exactly funny, as you said, but I did find it amusing. And I thank you for putting Mary Sue parody as the Third Level MS because those are almost as bad as real MS stories.

However, I'm kinda sad you didn't continue on to the more dangerous MS types. Like action type ones so well disguised and kickass that if you mention it to someone, they accuse you of being sexist. Even if you're a girl too. /facepalm

And while I welcome strong independent main character girls (as it's easier to connect to someone of Tge same gender), there is a very fine line between that and a Mary Sue. A line that is pretty much always crossed when you're concerning OCs in the DN fandom.

Sorry for the rant. It's just that Mary Sues just get me really riled up. There are just so many, in fanfiction and actual books. It's like a plague.

YES, exactly. I knew there was a reason I loved you. :D