Aww... So bittersweet.

Perfect.

The last line of this is perfect. I like how you frame the main part of the story with Andromeda's funeral and how Jonathan parallels Teddy's experiences with death and love at four years old. Nicely done. :]

That last sentence... God! I'm such a sap! I'm actually crying!

The beginning was a little confusing, but once I was able to better understand this, I thought that this piece was really well done! I love Teddy's memory, though I personally would have used the past tense in it. I thought your depiction of Victorie was awesome, and I'd really like to see her written like this more often! I really like how your story comes full circle, ending with Jonathan, just as it began. Great job!

Title: 2/5

Creativity: 4/5

Characters: 7/10

Use of Prompt/Age: 7/10

Grammar/Writing Mechanics: 7/10

Overall story: 7/10

Total: 34/50

Strong ending to the first and last sections. Nice work.

This is great :) I love the idea of the moment when Teddy realizes he is alone, and it's not surprising that it's so young. Nice job :)

This was really good. I love it, especially little Victoire and her parents )

Oh this is so sad! I love it! I feel so bad for Teddy.

I like this quite a bit. It's... I really like Teddy. He's a good father.

This was a lovely little fic. Teddy's four-year-old self is very in character. He's so funny! Andromeda's a very good character. I liked how you portrayed her.

The only mistake I could find was in the story summary, where you used "to" instead of "too".

Good job!

Ah, this is sad and beautiful and just lovely. The flashback scne is wonderful, and it's very realistic how Teddy was upset by something siad in passing that wasn't intended or even seen to be hurtful. Love it.