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MysticRising chapter 1 . 5/22/2019 I knew Reborn was a voyager, and a pedophile, I guess. Does it count? He's like 40/60 but in a baby's body. Not bad, but too short. Never forget, foreplay is IMPORTANT. Why do people think a quicky is good and arousing? It's boring. Foreplay is what makes this fun cause it builds up arousal for the... buildup. Plus, I always liked sex scenes with emotions, like love, passion, possessiveness, adoration, ect. |
g27 chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 It didn't sucked but I was expecting more especially the blow part. |
Melody Hyguya chapter 1 . 11/13/2017 This is good. But describe how Tsuna feel toward Hibari u won't just have sex with a close friend right or just someone you know |
SpiritofLove961 chapter 1 . 5/23/2014 This was really good; I liked it! Superb work! 3 Spirit |
jenuuchi chapter 1 . 1/26/2014 Had me reading at: awesomest anime ever created, Katekyo Hitman Reborn! Rei: Bcuz u obsess over this Tsubasa: o.o does she obsess or love KHR more? Keiko: Obsess I agree All three: *facepalm* |
ComputerIdiot chapter 1 . 1/10/2013 For your first lemon, that's not bad Keep up the good work ;) |
CreativeVisionary chapter 1 . 6/10/2012 This is my first review so dont blow at me for it. The plot was exciting and admirable for the shortness of it. The bondage idea was great as it gives some excitement to it. What you can improve on is adding more detail into it. It would have helped if Tsuna was reluctaint because that would have given it a lot more meaning. Though this sounds a bit unfair I give this a 3/10. This is due to the lack of meaning and basicly plot in whole. |
AkaiNamida chapter 1 . 4/6/2012 *Nosebleeding* -/- Reborn, you naughty baby~! #Slapped A-Anyways... Please make more 1827 fanfics! /O/ I loved it! It's one of my most favorite 1827 oneshots! */O/* Though I was wondering how Reborn got those... Erotic things -/- Well, he have his own ways XD Ciao~ |
Shadow Kitsune67 chapter 1 . 9/14/2011 Ahaha. Reborn is such a voyeur. xP Then again. Who wouldn't want to watch. ;D Hibari possessing Tsuna is always hot. *w* Nice oneshot :3 |
Muranura chapter 1 . 8/28/2011 OMG! Tis is so far one of my favs :D keep writing more 1827 3 BTW, Im also from singapore so tat means yur gonna have to be my sempai from now onwards :3 please to be in yur acquaintance :D ummss... I've been wanting to write my own 1827 story for quite a few weeks now but i dont know wat to write abt... Plus im afraid of ppl not liking it... So... Can u help please? If u dont want to then its ok.. Or if you are busy... :D |
Nekokratik chapter 1 . 8/27/2011 Happy belated birthday! XD Hope you had a nice day! |
13animenurd13 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011 lol xd im not gonna ask how reborn got ahold of those things lol cause hes got his ways~ lol xD |