Hola! No hablo inglés y aun asi lei todo el fic traduciendolo.
Maravillosa la forma en que describes sus personalidades y la relacion de james y lily.
espero lo continues ya que parece abandonado.

Lily's a bitch. James deserves better

That comparison is so spot on. BRILLIANT. bloody brilliant.

So I know it is only five chapters but this was the best fanfiction story I have read since TLAT. And I am so disappointed that you never continued. I know it's a long shot since its been years but please consider!

hey... umm what happen to this ... I LOVED IT AND READ IT ALL IN ALL IN LIKE A HOUR, and u never said it was over and i was wondering if after all this time if u would continue it i understand if u don't want to i was just wondering .. thank you for posting this wonderful work 3

I've never cared much for prologues but this one really really stuck in my mind. Loving this story already, and the story didn't even begin.

It makes me uncomfortable what she is planning, I can already imagine the fallout

Great chapter !

This is a good chapter. Are you continuing this story? That sounds like a stupid question 'cause you haven't updated for a while, but still...

I hope you update this someday. This story is so good. I love the brief scene with Sirius and James.

Love it! Please update soon!

MORE! :)

If James and Lily date anyone but each other I'm gonna have a fit

Love the prologue!

I like how your exploring the idea that the beginning of Lily and James' relationship started out of spite for Snape, it a very interesting idea, and your doing it very realistically. Also, I really like Edric, he's a great side character and I love that he's all oblivious to Eliza, as long as it works out in the end :) Great Story, looking forward to seeing how it continues