Reviews for The Problem
SharKohen chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
Flynn...oh, Flynn... I'm rather sorry for the guard now.
IWasNeverReal chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
HAHAHA! The relationship between these two reminds me of Kaito Kid and Hakuba from Detective Conan. Awesome story!
Kiera Embers chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
As always your story is charming and funny
PrayerGirl chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
This is very good! They're in character and the ending was hilarious!
nikkibecket1997 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
there needs to be a tv series showing eugene and the captian's adventures and the first episode would be the one with the harem girls. it would be pure awsome.
yay chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
This is great. Both the characters act exactly the way you'd expect them to.
elanor of aquitania chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Well written, but somehow not convincing for me.
Sylarfan chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Great story. Totally on character for both, perfect banter between the two...loved it.
calicar chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Genius! Absolutely brilliant! :D
Songirl chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Really fun. I so enjoy this spirit of naivete and freshness in your writing. It makes me smile every time.

Jen
Cordelia Darcy chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
...and so it begins. Again. Aww, poor Captain, he really has no chance against Flynn. But still, I'm glad they had this talk.

Oh, and I would really, REALLY like to hear about this mountain-climbing, female-ninja-fighting brothel experience. Well anyhow this was cute and funny and slightly sad-ish and I loved it!
Mrs Snowball chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I adore this story. Absolutely adore it. It's not only extremely well-written (well, all your stories are) and they're both so in-character. I don't blame the Captain, really; as much as I like him, I'd find Flynn annoying too, if I was in his shoes. Oh, and thanks to this, I now want to draw the Captain fighting off some ninja harem girls. Thanks for that. XD

Honestly, we need more stories where the Captain's like this; not over-the-top, not evil, but human. Just... human. This situation would irk ANYONE, and you pulled it off so well.
Wittgen chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
That last line works as an incredible punchline to the story. Well done. I really enjoyed it.
lilly pop chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
i love your writting but honestly we need more eugean and repunzel! and your the master of that...realy want to see a sequel to what u dont know...u know they honey moon have kids pleeeeeeeaaaassseeee!
Redflowercactus chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Hmm. As much as I like this story for the way it studies the characters... I just don't see it happening.
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