This is truly excellent. Here’s hoping the author comes back to it someday.

I love it already! _

And I predict Slytherin with a speed that compeats with Draco. Knowledge for the SAKE of Power Slytherin. (Ravenclaw is out. He has no use for Knowledge that has no use. If he is incapable of fear, gryffindor is out, because you cannot be brave without feeling fear and act against it. Hufflepuff is HIGHLY unlikly, and obvious.)

I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you don't fall into the trap and think the sorting hat were ever gonna give him a choice when it was clearly just testing him in the books.

Keep writing! _

Its too scattered for a story. Continuation is important and with you jumping around to many different viewpoints at different times kills the story completely

Nooooooo. Why did you have to trap Draco in that book... I hope he gets out...if only for narcissa.

You are really great at making characters have real depth. You really manage to humanise them, like in this chapter, you made me want umbridge, who I don’t usually like, to win, because I felt for her and I could see where she was coming from. You are really good at writing backstories.

Oh my god are you trying to give me nightmares! I feel sorry for Draco.

Holy shit I have not laughed that hard in so long. Bitchin chapter.

I really like your take on Harry. Psychologically speaking, this IS one of the two ways he could turn out, and the only way he could turn out if he was strong. (In the books, he -should- have been a muted, quivering wreck, really, to become the moldable person he is there. But it is a theoretical possibillity, tho I lile your version better.)

But you're kinda godmodding/Mary-sue-ing him. Just a bit.

And he would never trust an autority figure to capture peter. He'd either do it himself, or kill him...depending on which exact motivation that won out.

The extreme reliance on copy and pasted repeated descriptions from earlier chapters is super amateurish and annoying.

Indication that there might be some feeling in there after all is interesting, Fleur having a desire to make him feel more is interesting.

This chapter is much worse than the previous ones. It veers into lazy crack.

Is Ginny dead?

Again, the last line of the chapter is the best one. Keep it up!

Last paragraph makes this interesting, I hope you'll continue to explore the idea of fighting limitations to his knowledge.

Why would Harry work with dumbledore? Shouldn't he hate him? He DID leave Harry with magic hating muggles and ensured a shitty growing up, and he has done nothing at all for him afterwards. Plus, if he hasn't already figured it out, it will soon enough become clear that dumbledore is plotting to make Harry kill both Voldemort and himself in a martyric move. That would piss most people off, doubbly so a sociopath.