Awesome litteraly awsome please make more for us to read. But I have one favor to ask you PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT WHERE DAN AND RUNO'S SON IS THE MAIN FIGHTER. What I mean is in all the bakugan season's dan is the only one who is strongest out of the rest of his battle brawler. Make it where all of their children have a chance to become stronger together.

Hi

you idea is reali cool

i have some idea about nagas plans

I love your plot!and I have a idea for Naga's plan,how about this? One of Naga's lakies manipulates one of the brawler's kids

I love your plot!and I have a idea for Naga's plan,how about this? One of Naga's lakies manipulates one of the brawler's kids

epic story! Pleaz write the rest of it i really like it, but you say you won't wrtie more until it's all planned out! (i get that being perpared is better though) Can you AT LEAST write the parts you already laid out. (besides this part) and update them Huhu PLEAZZZZ PLEAZZZ PLEAZZZZ with suger on top and unlimted topings on top...

Have Naga do something different maybe something the shows has never done before.

I enjoyed reading this chapter but I found the story-telling thing a bit too cliche. I've seen this used many times, but I have to say, the way you did it was pretty okay.

The one thing I really liked was how you didn't describe all the kids completely from head to toe, one after another because that gets really boring (to me, at least). If you would still like to describe their outfits, however, you could have one kid say/do something, then describe their appearances afterward instead of simply introducing a train of paragraphs, describing one kid at a time. The train of paragraphs isn't so bad when used with few characters, but since you have lots of characters to introduce, I think it's better to avoid that. That's just one suggestion of mine.

Good start!

brilliant! I just LOVE IT! if it was me writing it it would have been a crap story, you are just great at writing fics! I wish I could write as good as you. the chapter was great, especially the part with dan telling how he and drago beat naga. also, naga's plan was great! i would never thought of that. i would rate it10／10, i just can't think that there's anything wrong with it. please update soon!

This is a rellay good story. I've read it about 7 times now

why is it that in most of these next generation fic the kids get their parents' Bakugans. Besides that great fic.

Eh not bad

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AH! i've been waiting forever! its a good start and u realy r good at depecting the brawlers children nicely i cant wait till the next chap

-lilly321

Ooo! This is a really interesting idea, bringing back Naga to fight the children of the brawlers! I love how you opened the story with Dan telling the story of how the original Battle Brawlers defeated Naga.

You did a really good job at keeping in character when Naga was revealing his plan to the others, too. It'd be really easy to lose his impatience and wanting to keep a lot to himself, telling the others just enough for them to be convinced it will work. And it sounds just like him to have realized he was losing and put a part of himself in the Silent Core before Drago absorbed it and to bide his time for so long to be sure of the brawlers' belief he's gone. Kudos!

I love the ending scene, too, with Drago almost getting what could be considered a warning (or at least a clue) that Naga's going to come back to fight him.

So I basically love the whole chapter. :D

Hm...ideas for small plot...well, is Naga aware of the fact that the Battle Brawlers he fought originally have children? It would be interesting to see when one of the other four go to fight the Battle Brawlers and their shock and when they find out that Drago, Gorem, and Preyas have new battlers. I can see Naga's reaction to learning that he won't be fighting the humans who originally defeated him - at least not at the same time as fighting Drago and the others. It's just an idea, though. Hope it helps!

Please update soon!

Amazing chapter. I've read your previous works as well as seen your artwork. Simply amazing. Hm...Nothing so far. Sorry. Well, I do have an idea, but that's for later storyline.

This is really creative and I really like it I looked at the pics u did for this story and there so cool I hope you continue this cause it would make a great fanfic best of luck